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I loved this! Yamcha/Future Trunks is definitely a pairing that would give Freud a field day, wouldn't it? But I've come to enjoy it lately. I read this story last year, but I think it deserves a proper review because I have an account now. I liked how Yamcha had Vegeta issues in this story and some mild Bulma issues; It reminds me of a story with the Yamcha/Future Trunks pairing on the DBZ kink meme on livejournal that I liked. Sadly, that and this story are the only two I've found featuring the Yamcha/Future Trunks pairing.

I was really happy about all of the Trunks being in love with Gohan references. That pairing is awesome. I liked that even though Trunks was drawn to Yamcha because he looks like Gohan and Yamcha was drawn to Trunks because he looks like Vegeta, they ended up liking each other for who they were, not who they looked like. I feel bad for Yamcha, since he now has another crush on a Saiyan he can't have.

Speaking of which, it was nice to see a fic where Yamcha topped. Not that I don't like stories that are the other way around, but variety is nice. Also, you write beautifully and I love that unlike a lot of other fanfiction writers, you seem to be proofreading your stuff.

I liked this fic, very much so, and it surprised me. I never would imagine that understanding between those two... But the last sentence were the best: falling for another sayajin he couldn't have... xDD

perfect

Nice! Interesting pair with Yamcha/Mirai Trunks, though it ended up being partially a Mirai Gohan/Mirai Trunks anyway. :3 I'm also very much amused at Yamcha crushing on Vegeta. Poor guy's got it tough. :P

What an unexpected treat!

Girl that was HOT. I really liked it, enough to read it twice ;)

Who'd've thought YamchaxTrunks could be so m/m mmmmm....

I also liked how it was all Truhan-y, too. And I have to wonder who Trunks got all that experience with, lol.

Anyway, well done, thanks for a great read!

PS, so marc got you, too, huh? LOL

The apostrophe-s debate is a hot topic, it seems. But after many people offered their opinions, I consulted an english phd friend of mine and he confirmed "Trunks's" is historically correct though the modern trend is to use only an apostrophe. But hey, I'm a purist! Apostrophe-s all the way :P

Well now this is a pleasant surprise. I always like seeing something with a different pairing.

And this is such a neat one! I feel bad for poor Yamcha...Screwing his ex-girlfriend's son...while crushing on his father. The stuff of therapy. Anyway, I think you did a good job with him.

Definitely entertaining XD.