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May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this story. You deploy a sense of haziness apt for the subject matter and Vegeta’s age. A keen use of dialogue mixed with subtly stomach-knotting images. It works well as a one-shot and a precursor.
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March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story. It's sad and disturbing. Extremely well written. I've always entertained the idea of Jeice/Vegeta. I think you captured it greatly!