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April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I think I'm okay with being to blame for this. Feel free to accuse me all you want.
This is better than mine, I think, on a couple of levels. It's no small feat to fit that much emotion into a PWP, and especially to do it effectively, believably. I mean, I was really convinced that they were feeling it, you know? I think you're wrong, labeling it PWP. That fact right there elevates it above that level. Trust me; I've written a lot of truly plotless smut and I know what I'm talking about.
And then there's the whole 'first person present tense stream of consciousness' thing, which normally makes me want to find a sharp object to wield, but which you do so goddamn well, and it makes the narration that much more effective than if it were third person...
Oh, and did I mention the sex was really fucking hot?
And on that note, for some reason I had to laugh at destructosex. The word, I mean. How have I never heard that before?
Anywho, kudos. Feel free to, you know, keep writing.
This is better than mine, I think, on a couple of levels. It's no small feat to fit that much emotion into a PWP, and especially to do it effectively, believably. I mean, I was really convinced that they were feeling it, you know? I think you're wrong, labeling it PWP. That fact right there elevates it above that level. Trust me; I've written a lot of truly plotless smut and I know what I'm talking about.
And then there's the whole 'first person present tense stream of consciousness' thing, which normally makes me want to find a sharp object to wield, but which you do so goddamn well, and it makes the narration that much more effective than if it were third person...
Oh, and did I mention the sex was really fucking hot?
And on that note, for some reason I had to laugh at destructosex. The word, I mean. How have I never heard that before?
Anywho, kudos. Feel free to, you know, keep writing.