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May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Constructive Criticism:
"...his eyes frown in a fitful nightmare." How does eyes frown? Fitful may not be the best word to use because it sounds funny and means sporadic or irregular.
"...his brows furrow as he tosses in the midst of an unsettling dream." Or something of the like. Nice start.
"...his eyes frown in a fitful nightmare." How does eyes frown? Fitful may not be the best word to use because it sounds funny and means sporadic or irregular.
"...his brows furrow as he tosses in the midst of an unsettling dream." Or something of the like. Nice start.