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May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"hither and thro" do you mean "hither and thither"? The phrase should flow as the latter does.
"Luckily they were safely concealed within the thick brush of trees and bush." Do you mean
"Luckily they were safely concealed within the thick canopy of trees."
Keep up the good work.
"Luckily they were safely concealed within the thick brush of trees and bush." Do you mean
"Luckily they were safely concealed within the thick canopy of trees."
Keep up the good work.
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May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story, I hope you keep going :)
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May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story, they're a little bit OC but nothing that's unbelievable. :)
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May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The classic pairing of Trowa/Quatre I support. I do like to mix it up with a threesome of Wufei/Heero/Duo. I'm working on a fic right now for them and I'm making it work. I haven't uploaded it yet, but when its done I will. Saying all that to say that there is life outside of the traditional...LOL.
Keep up the good work.
Keep up the good work.