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There's a certain creepy quality that I get from visualizing Fei at Treize's mercy at his small size, but I like the dialogues between them and seeing things through 'Fei's eyes at his tiny size, like the pencils, spoon, hankie, etc. That gives this story texture that I enjoy.

Keep it coming.

Oh wow. That was intriguing! Like you, I was a little skeptical of the premise of the story, but figured 'hell, may as well give it a shot'. I'm glad I did. It's totally different and the best part is that you took an idea that could have become something silly and instead made it work as a serious plotline. Bravo! I especially love Zech's comment about the situation seeming like something out of a science fiction story. That was perfect to have him and Treize in that state of disbelief instead of just saying 'oh, well it *was* an experimental weapon so we'll just take that excuse and run with it and pretend like that was supposed to happen'. There are some stories where that would have worked but for this one I'm happy to see you found a simple but oh-so-much-better way to spin it. I'm VERY interested to see more and while the dialogue was a little awkward at the start, you seemed to hit your stride a couple paragraphs in. It was enjoyable, and I was disappointed to see the chapter end. ^_^ Hope to see more from you soon.

~Whip~