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February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
couldn't stop reading it but I got a bit confused at the end.
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July 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
@_@ i really wish you had written this in standard story form, instead of how you did it as if you were RPing with someone. I've completely lost interest in this within about 10 minutes because of that. It seems like a good story, and the people reviewing like it; but I cant follow because of how you chose to write it. I definitely suggest trying story form.
--Android22
--Android22
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July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hoope you write a sequel to this story.
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July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ummm Chapters 7 and 8 are the same. Just letting you know.
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July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved this fic also :D Can't wait for the next fic you write ^^
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July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am currently loving this story, though it would be better and more interesting if you wrote it in actual story format not name and talk, and * for action. That gets boring, and for some people annoying, at one point in time. You know what I'm saying? I'm not saying that you have to fix up with the chapters with this, I'd just advise to start writing as such. Good job, though, and keep writing.
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July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the recent update :D Can't wait for the next chapter :3
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July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked the new chapter a lot :D This story is beginning to grow on me XD Can't wait for the next update
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June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.