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Loved this so far. :3 Can't wait to read more

*whistles* Sexy! I love Trunks and Vegeta's relationship. I can't wait to see how Trunks reacts to Bulma now that he's so involved with Vegeta.

Aw, Trunks! This is such an interesting story! At first I was a little put off with the format (no quotation marks and whatnot), but as I read, it just didn't matter, because I like the plot so much. In addition to a great storyline, you seem to pay attention to realistic details, which just add to the fic as a whole. I can't wait for an update!

This is a very entertaining read! Some parts have me where i can't read anymore, but i do. :) That part with 17 was ruthless, but it seems inevitable with Gohan's fate. v.v I hope Trunks can make things right in the past. It was irresponsible for him to leave Vegeta emotionally confused like that. :/ Even more so when he started it in the first place...he should really think before he acts. However, i do understand his motives. :) Another thing i love about this is that the chapters are super long! It's been a long while since i've ran into a story like this. ^^ I do hope you continue writing this...you have so much inspiration! I'm almost envious. ^^

This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!

I believe it was a very good story. I am excited to read more!