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August 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
When you put chapter 3 up, the next time the three of them get together, have both Goten an Trunks intertwine their tails together when their close to their end and SLAM THEIR TAIL IN HER CUNT, SO DEEP THEY REACH HER WOMB JUST AS THEY REACH THEIR END. Also I not trying to sound demanding and I'm sorry if I do; but I get hot when the characters say THE DARKEST AN DIRTIEST WORDS. I was wondering if you made it where Trunks an Goten turn into that red super sayin, if that's the very last stage of any super sayin, that any sayin can get to.
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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad little story; Shao is refreshingly un-Mary Sueish as far as OCs go. I'm a big fan of MMF bi three ways, and Goten/Trunks are my all-time favorite pairings, so it was nice to see them fooling around with each other and a girl at the same time. I don't really like them with tails, and I wish Goten had had a chance to take Shao from the front. I'm glad Goten and Trunks topped each other, I can't see either of them as "always top" or "always bottom."