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Typical Vegeta rushing off to fight when he thought Buu was weaker without thinking it through first!

Very interesting development this splitting. Now that Buu has spent so much energy creating it, will Goku be able to come out more. He did stop Bow from killing Vegeta but still rushed off afterwards.

Eager to find out what happens next :)

With this new Buu entity in the picture, what's gonna happen to Vegeta now! The suspense is killing me XD!!

I am bouncing on my chair awaiting the next chapter. I didn't think I would like such a parring but goddamn I like very much. I love the interactions between Vegeta and Buu an oddly enough I want more more more and I kinda want Buu to gain Vegeta in the end like holyyy. Never thought I would say or think such a thing.... It's you're fault that I am lol. Keep writing I'll keep reading.

Now that ending left a question mark in my brain. Wonder what Buu could possibly be screaming about, Kami only knows what :). But I'll have to wait till next chappie to find out.

The moments between Vegeta and Buu/Goku are kind of bittersweet, especially with the kiss. Absolutely love the scene with Dente and Vegeta together. Write more soon!

fascinating chapter. I love the look into Dende, who is so often ignored, and the wisdom of the Guardian of Earth. The scene with Vegeta is done beautifully, even after his rage of other chapters, and it all fits him. I'm immensely curious about just what's happening in Buu now, too. Is it an attack from someone within, or is it his denial of someone he absorbed and their effect? I love the idea of looking into Goku's very unique and sometimes simple but sometimes complex personality and unexpected ways of feeling or being able to view things and people--his heart or mind and not just about the power.

I was wondering how far you were going to go into Goku and Vegeta's relationship after this. I like how you're talking about the kinship and respect and intense focus even in anger or hate toward the other as an enemy or opponent-- but I'm kind of hoping the interest in a male/male relationship or sexual attraction could be a part of it, or have been an underlying part of their relationship. I'm a huge Vegeta/Goku shipper, of course, though, and I didn't know if you just wanted them to be very close friends.

Great job so far! Well-written chapter and great insight and mood.

Will goku come out? Will goku come out!? Waiting so excitedly for next chapter.

That was a nice moment between Vegeta and Dende, glad Dende was able to give him some peace.

Oh dear what is happening to Buu? Is he going to unabsorb someone, and what about the person he was looking for? Intriquing!

It seems Goku is really getting to Buu, I was sure Vegeta was a gonner or at least left like before, but it's like he has a split personality now. I loved reading the confusion in both Buu and Vegeta.

Really intriqued as to who this neutral party is that Buu thinks will help him.

Man it just get's even more awesome as it goes! The story thickens, I wonder who Buu's potential ally will be. So happy you updated, but now it's just left me wanting even MORE XD!!