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May 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! You are a brilliant writer, it was so super sexy!
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April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Phew they are all safe but for how long. Good explanation for why Buu is acting that way, I hope Goku can break through though.
Oh dear, I wonder if Buu will find Vegeta as he goes for the dragon rader.
Oh dear, I wonder if Buu will find Vegeta as he goes for the dragon rader.
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April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad this is becoming more of a story. kinda worried about vegeta and how all this is affecting him. I'm still hopeful goku will make an appearance tho. I reread the first chapter and it still gives me shivers. so glad you're updating ^^
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March 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm back, so happy to see another chappie added to this story!! It was just too good to be a oneshot! Awesome to see Goku reeking havoc within Buu's psyche (lol)!
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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, loving how Goku is affecting Buu but it's gonna back-fire it seems. Will Vegeta get to Chichi in time? I'm eager to find out :)
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March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you wrote a second chapter and I can hardly wait for you to continue! I really hope that Vegeta can be the hero for once, and/or that Goku can somehow defeat Buu from within.
You have a great way for shwoing the mental state they are in. I'm looking forward to the next part!
You have a great way for shwoing the mental state they are in. I'm looking forward to the next part!
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March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That Vegeta--he's a machine. you paint the denial sooo well. I imagine he'd crack if he wasn't so focused. and yay goku for retaliation (i hope!) I eagerly look for more! awesome job!
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November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
My original review dissappeared :(
Anyway I loved it, poor tortued Vegeta :)
Anyway I loved it, poor tortued Vegeta :)
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August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW, I absolutely loved this. But it's a great pity this is only a oneshot. I think this oneshot has great potential into becoming a full fledge story, and an awesome one at that. You just can't leave it right there, it has too many what if's XD! Plus it would give Vegeta a chance to be the hero for once. I also liked your idea of Buu absorbing Goku, I knew it would somehow affect Buu's personality with his softer traits.
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August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well that was certainly not a disappointment! Excellent characterization, even through all the psychological torture. And I could totally see a sequel to this...but I'll leave you to your own devices. :3