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That was beautifully twisted! At first I thought it was just going to be Buu being creepy but by the end it didn't seem to be just Buu there. Poor Vegeta. Great job ^__^

I is a thrilling read, i didnt want the story to finish. Fantastic style!

This was a great idea for a story, and I think you pulled it off very well. Your characterization of Buu in particular was strong, and the ending was perfect in concept. There are some things in your writing that could be smoother IMO, including a good number of places where you simply used the wrong word. If you are interested in a beta, let me know (there is no intended insult in that - I think I need one myself, just to catch the mistakes that I missed; even the pros need editors). I could probably do a story or chapter this length within 24 hours of you sending it to me (though I suspect that most of the little mistakes came more from impatience on your part than anything else). In any case, thanks for the fic!

Wow...WOW!!

I haven't been on this site for some time because nothing has really been interesting me lately. I read the summary to this story and was so excited to read it!! I'm am absolutely Not disappointed. Amazing! Amazing! I seriously have not given a raving review like this in some time. Excellent psychological torture. I loved the horror, I loved the sheer emotion, I loved it all. Vegeta! Vegeta was so in character and so abused and so torn. I could never write Vegeta's warring pride like you have. It's fantastic. Definitely one of my favorites at the moment.