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June 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
When I saw this update, I nearly hyperventilated.
Wow...this is pretty horrifying. The fact that Bow is really just experimenting to see how far he can push Vegeta is truly scary. He doesn't do this out of lust or desire...it's simply for fun. Because of that, who knows what Bow's limits are. How is Vegeta going to recover from this!? I wonder if Buu will return to taunt Vegeta or if the Goku inside of him will see how terrible this all is.
Oh my God...can't wait for the next chapter.
Wow...this is pretty horrifying. The fact that Bow is really just experimenting to see how far he can push Vegeta is truly scary. He doesn't do this out of lust or desire...it's simply for fun. Because of that, who knows what Bow's limits are. How is Vegeta going to recover from this!? I wonder if Buu will return to taunt Vegeta or if the Goku inside of him will see how terrible this all is.
Oh my God...can't wait for the next chapter.
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May 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
please, continue it!!!!! dont stop here....i NEED read the next.....need, pleeeeeaaaassseee!!!!!!!!!!
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February 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh god Vegeta nooo! T~T this is going to hurt so much, for him and for me.
It's sad to think that Vegeta and Buu were actually starting to form something too, or if not Buu then the part of Goku that's inside of Buu. And Vegeta actually started to feel something, maybe not love but a fondness from their time adventuring the earth. Vegeta started slightly trusting Buu even with all of his weariness towards him but after Bow is done with him that's probably going to be ruined. Having Bow hurt Vegeta is only going to make things worse but Buu can't see that right now because he's only thinking of his own feelings and not looking from Vegeta's point of view. And I'm so afraid for Vegeta right now! GAWD I love this story, just pour the angst, sadness, and feelings all over me until I drown!
It's sad to think that Vegeta and Buu were actually starting to form something too, or if not Buu then the part of Goku that's inside of Buu. And Vegeta actually started to feel something, maybe not love but a fondness from their time adventuring the earth. Vegeta started slightly trusting Buu even with all of his weariness towards him but after Bow is done with him that's probably going to be ruined. Having Bow hurt Vegeta is only going to make things worse but Buu can't see that right now because he's only thinking of his own feelings and not looking from Vegeta's point of view. And I'm so afraid for Vegeta right now! GAWD I love this story, just pour the angst, sadness, and feelings all over me until I drown!
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February 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Geez,update! It seems to be a good time to be a fan of yaoi Vegetacentric ::grin::
Well,things have come to the logical point that could predict.
Poor Vegeta , although this is so typical of his personality,prefer what dictates pride above the practical way, the fact despise Buu had to have its consequences. I cannot wait the next update!
Well,things have come to the logical point that could predict.
Poor Vegeta , although this is so typical of his personality,prefer what dictates pride above the practical way, the fact despise Buu had to have its consequences. I cannot wait the next update!
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February 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, it seems like a whole lot of cats are out of a dozen bags! Buu's behavior is very unsettling after learning that Vegeta is planning something to destroy him and Bow looks like he is cooking something terrible for Vegeta as well.
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February 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Damn I love this, I really like how Buu is slowly changing because of Vegeta's presence and how their interactions on their dates end up being kind of awkward in a creepy yet kind of cute way. All the traumatic psychological and physical torture Vegeta is enduring must be very stressful. Amazing story!
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February 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Every time. Every time I see this fanfic updated I get sooooo excited. Intense chapter.
"After all that Buu had done for Vegeta. After everything. The only reason the Saiyan was still alive was because Buu had been merciful enough to leave him that way."
It's amazing, after seeing how gentle Buu had become with Vegeta, it almost makes the reader forget that in the end, Buu is an abusive, dangerous foe. And what a great job you did at showing classic abusive behavior. Buu was "nice" to Vegeta as long as he got his way in the end. But now that Vegeta has left, it's really "If I can't have him, no one will." After the absolutely horrendous things he did to Vegeta, he thinks that the saiyan prince owes him something. Wow!! Great chapter.
My angst-radar is off the charts now.
"After all that Buu had done for Vegeta. After everything. The only reason the Saiyan was still alive was because Buu had been merciful enough to leave him that way."
It's amazing, after seeing how gentle Buu had become with Vegeta, it almost makes the reader forget that in the end, Buu is an abusive, dangerous foe. And what a great job you did at showing classic abusive behavior. Buu was "nice" to Vegeta as long as he got his way in the end. But now that Vegeta has left, it's really "If I can't have him, no one will." After the absolutely horrendous things he did to Vegeta, he thinks that the saiyan prince owes him something. Wow!! Great chapter.
My angst-radar is off the charts now.
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February 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh Vegeta!!! I'm so scared for him >.<
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January 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love it so much!! The interaction between Dende and Vegeta were heartbreaking but I can completely understand why Vegeta would think the way he is. And Dende really thinks of Vegeta as a friend but there's nothing he can do about anything so he's probably feeling helpless about the situation, plus he's really sad because he knows Vegeta truly thinks Dende wanted him to be Buu's toy.
I thought how Buu was courting Vegeta was really sweet, in kind of a messed up way since during the first few 'dates' Vegeta was freaking out because Buu raped him but he slowly got more comfortable with hanging out. Haha Buu just can't calm his damn horny tentacles, he got too pushy and now Vegeta doesn't want to get near him again. And it's like Buu's trying to be nice but he can't actually be nice because he's like a big stupid brat. Vegeta and Buu's little adventures together were really cool and I kind of hope to see more of them but I have the feeling that since Vegeta didn't go back to him for two weeks Buu is going to do something really bad to him, poor Vegeta. I'm really excited to see what happens to him! Your new chapters were as wonderful and brilliant as always!! XD
I thought how Buu was courting Vegeta was really sweet, in kind of a messed up way since during the first few 'dates' Vegeta was freaking out because Buu raped him but he slowly got more comfortable with hanging out. Haha Buu just can't calm his damn horny tentacles, he got too pushy and now Vegeta doesn't want to get near him again. And it's like Buu's trying to be nice but he can't actually be nice because he's like a big stupid brat. Vegeta and Buu's little adventures together were really cool and I kind of hope to see more of them but I have the feeling that since Vegeta didn't go back to him for two weeks Buu is going to do something really bad to him, poor Vegeta. I'm really excited to see what happens to him! Your new chapters were as wonderful and brilliant as always!! XD
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January 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Now we're getting somewhere! I'm so excited to read what happens next. I literally cannot think of how you're going to change things around for Vegeta, Buu, Bow and Goku (and the earth, of course). It's not often that there's a story where almost everyone dies, including Goku.. I like how you have Goku and Vegeta's relationship set up and also how you have Bow and Buu's relationship set up, so much unfinished, or even barely started business between them. This really is a great story, so unique. Thanks for writing.
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