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for Mind Rape

by MutantPoptart

person Ulrike
schedule January 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God. Oh. my. God. I loved this chapter. And as I've been reading, I've been feeling the same way, too! Vegeta is throwing away everything he has, giving up his body to Buu. And you captured his words perfectly! Of course he would feel used and manipulated. After all is said and done, how will Vegeta ever be able to recover his pride? Again, love the connection between Dende and Vegeta. It's so unique and well-portrayed. My heart is breaking for both characters!

But what is going to happen now?! Bow's words were pretty damn ominous. That guy is sadistic. And if Vegeta is ignoring Buu, will Buu feel the need to step in if Bow decides to act on his evil tendencies? Oh my God, so much stuff in this chapter. And the entire time you have Vegeta perfectly in character. His warrior honor has been pushing him to give up everything for the Earth and his loved ones, yet his pride just can't take it anymore. I have a feeling his brash decision is definitely going to lead to some bad events....and I can't wait to read them!!
person Talltree-san
schedule January 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting. I wonder if Buu is now really starting to look like Goku or maybe a mixture between Buu and Goku? Then there is Bow, kinda worried he is up to something, but don't know exactly what yet :( . Anyway it is getting very interesting indeed :D !
person Ulrike
schedule January 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! I loved the end of this chapter. A part of me wonders if Goku is actually consciously controlling the changes in Buu. Somehow, the connection between Goku and Vegeta is finding its way through Buu, but at the same time....Buu is a very original character himself. How much of Buu is authentic and how much is simply the unspoken connection between the two saiyajins? Short chapter, but still great! Are Buu's friendly meetings just the calm before the storm or is he truly in love with Vegeta? I'm excited to see what happens!
person anon
schedule November 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
la;jfdl;sakdfjsal; I love you so much this is so brilliant!!
person CakeKarma
schedule November 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you continue with this. it has been quite a long while since I found a fanfiction I enjoy reading. An image on y!gallery lead me here and I have read through each of the chapters within an hour and a half as is possessed.
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! Thank you, thank you, thank you sooo much for continuing the story!!!
person cara9001
schedule November 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you updated!! This is awesome poor Vegeta he's going through so much in this and I love every bit of it. Lol in the last chapter if I didn't know the entire situation I would've said that it was really romantic of Buu to say if he destroyed everything else in the universe he'd leave the sun just for Vegeta to enjoy. This is just such a great story, in this chapter I could really see how tired Vegeta was of the entire thing by the end of the day. I think that there was a sentence cut off toward the end of the chapter, it said 'He couldn’t budge and he could-' but then it cut off. I love you and I love this story, it's brilliant and fantastic! I really don't know how to properly describe the feeling I'm having for this story right now T~T
person Talltree-san
schedule November 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So happy to see this updated, thank you :D ! As much as I love Goku I wished the Buu saga could have went like this :) . It's a good thing the old Vegeta didn't meet Buu in the past or there would have been a whole slew of hellish trouble for the universe D: !
person Ulrike
schedule November 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Any time I see an update for this story I get so, sooooo excited. Like I have to squeal and flail around a bit before I can start the newest chapter.

Man, poor Vegeta. There aren't many fanfics out there that show Vegeta's relationship with Dende. It's an excellent depiction and it's almost heartbreaking that Vegeta views Dende as a friend and protector, yet he understands that Dende must do what he can to save Earth--even if it means using him.

I still don't trust this Bow guy. I think he's going to pull something really shady and severely hurt Vegeta. And what will happen when Buu finally moves forward with Vegeta? So much I need to know! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Anon
schedule October 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much, it's just so perfect and well written! Please please pleeeeaaase update soon, I know you haven't to a long time and I'm really hoping that you haven't given up on writing more for it. T~T

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