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I'm so blown away by this story and I do hope you update again soon. Great character protrait & captivating scenes.

I'm never disappointed when I catch up on this story. But currently I'm freaking out about this last chapter because I don't have any idea how it can be resolved. What I suspected about Goku was true but I guess I'll just have to wait to see if it can still happen ;^;

And thus Vegeta bears the consequences of his act of leaving the Lookout...really sad and even worse the Buus are still there O_O!

MORE,MORE,MORE!!!!!!!!!!!

I have not been so pulled into a fic for a very very long time. I read the description and was immediately pulled in and haven't stopped reading since I began. Chapters 1-10. Great writing, good vocab, a few spelling errors but who cares honestly... this is an amazing story and I"m totally drawn in. You must put up the next part... seriously it's killing me. Gotta know what happens next! Don't stop in the middle of this like so many other fics have, please finish!

Ah, what a way to end the chapter! I'm desperate to see the next part now! It was a nice moment when Bulma compared Vegeta and Goku, usually thought to be opposites, and realized that they would have been doing the same thing or made the same choice--Saiyans. Great build-up of fear and suspense, and the chilling truth that terrible things can happen before the hero even has a chance to fight, not just at the end of the battle. Vegeta being too late to save or even try to save everyone on the Lookout was awful and realistic for how cruel life can be, and that they didn't have to wait for a dramatic showdown, and no matter how important a person might be to one person like Vegeta to another their life is just a speck of dust and not worth waiting for.

Can't wait to read what will happen with Buu and Vegeta, and what role you might have Bow play! Great job.

Dear Kami above, you are very good at what you do. I breathlessly await the next installment of this fantastic story. I am such a huge fan of the Goku/Vegeta pairing, but I have never seen it played from this angle before. You are Brilliant, beyond brilliant you are a genius. If my begging could somehow inspire you to post another chapter soon I would do so until I am blue in the face. Your newly faithful and completely devoted fan.

YAY, another chappie! I check back here every once in a while now just in case you updated. Anyway I feel for Vegeta, now that Goku is kinda temporarily indisposed of at the moment Geta finally has his moment to shine. And get his revenge on Buu as well, assuming he can get passed Bow first.

Wow, this chapter made me miss goku a lot. Is vegeta going to battle buu alone? but we all know he can not win. In the anemia, it took fusion of the two to win. Even I love the idea vegeta to be the hero this time, it would be great to have some goku help too. More believable that way. Can't wait to see how the two heal of this experience. This an epic story, please please continue.

OMG i am so happy you've posted again but what a cliffhanger!
I love this story so much and i can't wait to read more, please post more soon hun!
:)