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Darn Vegeta's pride, again, sure it would be awkward to face Goku, but wishing him back could be their only hope.

Oh no are they headed for the lookout!

Enjoyed reading how Goku got absorbed, hope Vegeta can understand what Dende is trying to tell him.

Man, this chappie made me miss Goku alot XD! But maybe this new plan will be just what Vegeta needs.

Wow this is getting good.
I love the way you write, so beautiful, so elegant.
This has the potential to be an epic and powerful story, I think.
This is quickly becoming one of my faves...
I love it, you are doing such a wonderful job and I absolutely cannot wait for more! ^_^

Another wonderful chapter! I loved the flashback to when Goku and Vegeta were fighting Buu that lets us better understand how the Saiyans were relating to each other through the fight even after Vegeta broke off from canon and refused fusion again. Have you ever seen the DBZ movie with Janemba in Hell? I think it was called Fusion Reborn. I always loved how Vegeta and Goku spoke to each other in that and Vegeta's pride and stubbornness couldn't get in the way of the underlying close relationship and Goku's sincerity there just like in your scene-- perfect! Though I can't help but wonder how differently it all might have turned out if Vegeta had been the one absorbed... Yikes.

I'm curious about what you're planning or what will happen with the dragonballs, but it's Vegeta and Goku's relationship that makes me so eager for the next chapter! Definitely looking forward to Vegeta trying to call out Goku and how Buu might have to struggle. I love looking into the Saiyan's personalities and strength of will rather than just power levels. How much will Vegeta learn about how Goku feels about him and if it will grow or change their relationship? After Buu is defeated, and maybe Bow, will Vegeta and Goku have to address trying to heal each other after the ugly experiences and trust each other?

Great story! Please keep writing!

Phew lucky escape for Vegeta there, but it doesn't look like Buu can restrain Bow for long.

I feel it's only a matter of time before Bow ultimately turns on Buu himself. He's like a boiling pot of water seconds before boiling over and burning your skin.

I like this story!

You describe Vegeta's, Buu's and Bow' feelings very good and the story goes on, even with a slow speed.
I'm excited about what happens next.
Thanks for writing this story!

This is very, very good so far. It definitely seems to be going somewhere. I love the way you describe and convey the psychology of Vegeta and Buu. Cannot wait to read more!!! ^_^

Your story is just about the only thing I come to this site to read anymore. Please continue because I really like it!