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Love your story it has action lemon and sex! hehe i realy love it. oh and by the way it said in dbgt that only a pure blooded saiyan can be a SS4. I vote for Super 17 he is still a gt villian that can come to life!!! oh i want to see the alturnite universe goku in his ss4 he gets the dragonballs in him and no one knows what happens to him after his battle with omegashenron.... he could come to this timeline!

Oh well, I kind of figured those three would be toast after the androids got done with them...but I look forward to seeing who the new villian will be. And btw, I was cracking up laughing at that little conversation between Trunks and 18 at the end! 'Wish for money'...Just like Yamcha after they beat Cell.

Knowing his so-called "followers", Dolltaki probably ended up in some makeshift prison or something...(evil laughter) As for villian votes; since they weren't mentioned as having been killed along with Buu and Babadi I was thinking about Dabura, Yakon and Pui Pui.

Come on, seriously? The first try and they get it perfect? Maybe Trunks and 18 ARE closer than he'd like to admit then...But anyway, given the path this is taking I'm predicting that either Rildo and the evil doctor find them or they have to take a trip to M2 for some reason.

Well I'm pretty sure about one thing; if Lord Luud's on New Namek, then more than likely Cardinal Muchi is there as well...Should be interesting. But I do have a request for someone to NOT make an appearance and that's Doll Taki.(sp?) He just creeps me out too much.

A really good pair of chapters; I'm looking forward to seeing if the Namekian Dragonballs of Trunks' timeline have been modified the same way they were in the main timeline; enabling everyone killed by the same cause to be brought back with one wish. And if that is the case, then all the Z fighters and Vegeta can be wished back with just the first wish. (Though I doubt even Porunga can bring Goku back this time; death by heart virus may be seen as 'natural' death to the dragon.) And if they can all be wished back, what will Trunks' and 18's other two wishes be?

I'm definitely looking forward to seeing what comes next; especially considering the fact that, if I'm not mistaken, most if not all the villians they face now will probably have to be OC's of your own creation. Please update as soon as possible; oh and I can't wait to see what happens when that whole "You killed my brother?" side arc comes into play.

Quite amusing thus far. Should prove entertaining to have Trunks finding himself protecting 18, 18 figuring out the truth of things, etc.