rate_review Reviews

Very nicely written! I am glad that your version of Bulma has some standards, she doesn't just jump in the sack when her genius brain goes to mush, giving Vegeta all the cards to bargain with their turbulent relationship.
I have to say that you have a wonderful way of ending your chapters, vy good transitions that keep you intrigued yet satisfied, even if there was no lemon
However, saying that, I am on pins and needles waiting for that. Lemon *winkwink* If ya get what I'm saying, eh? *nudgenudge*

awesome i love this! the characters are just so perfect and they seem to fit in with dbz universe so well. its nice to have some build up and character development before the lemon. you have captured the moment with lots of emotion as well as sexual tension, wonderful. as for the similarities with other stories i think a lot have a similar set up but i think that's to be expected with their beginning relationship. i don't think it takes anything away from the story or makes it plagiarism personally. anyway i can't wait for the next chapter.

Please, Please, Pleeeeease keep writing this story! It's awesome so far, can't wait to see what happens!

I loved this. It reminds me so much of another story I once read about Bulma and Vegeta that I loved. I actually thought it was that story for a bit, but you've taken a slightly turn at the end of chapter 1. I am VERY curious to see where you go with this, and I look forward to more. :)

Wow! Really enjoyed the first chapter of this story! I really like the way you've written Vageta more like his character from the DBZ Anime and manga! Can't wait to read the next chap and find out how Vegeta's going to deal with the ultimatum Balma just gave him! Great work!