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November 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story!!! It is very well written and I love the idea of this story. I love how innocent Goku is, it's just so cute. Vegeta isn't as innocent as Goku, but he's still not as experienced, which makes sense because he's 15, and I like how you portray him at this age. I really hope you update this soon :)
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November 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love it definitely you are awesome... sincerely you are awesome... i also love all of your other fic like the new kid in town..aw i love it ... and fate another of my favorite... i was wondering if you are going to up date on those and other one that i don't remember the name but know that i love theme.. anyway..please up date...
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July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was good! Both exploring each other and trying things out. It can only go up from there :)
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July 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh it's very beautifully well written, i thought the intimate scene with goku & vegeta was really adorable :D
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July 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ahh awesome stuff, it's really well written and i really love goku's naivete, it's really adorable
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April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really really like this story..I love the idea of them being teenagers..I love it! They're so innocent..n not..:D but I really enjoy reading this..you are a great writer..and I can't wait to read more of this! Sooo excited to see who will initiate it :) I'm just excited to read more..period. So, I hope to read more soon bc this story is soo awesome already..you're very creative and an excellent writer :)
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February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeah sorry animeslave. I haven't been around due to family illness and bereavement, but am back now.
So cute in the plane with Vegeta laughing, I was laughing too, and the bit where Goku wrapped his tail, not to mention the candyfloss moment was just so awwww :)
Loved your little 'Next time on Dragonall' in the footnotes, heard it in my head. As for who will win? All bets are off now Vegeta is there!
So cute in the plane with Vegeta laughing, I was laughing too, and the bit where Goku wrapped his tail, not to mention the candyfloss moment was just so awwww :)
Loved your little 'Next time on Dragonall' in the footnotes, heard it in my head. As for who will win? All bets are off now Vegeta is there!
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February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can’t wait to read what happens next.
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November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved how stubborn Vegeta was during and at the end of the spar, he still has no idea how strong Goku really is.
So sweet how neither of them know what to do to each other, it's so awkwared but so much fun to read :)
I think I would like to see King Picollo in the story, it would show Vegeta how strong Goku is.
So sweet how neither of them know what to do to each other, it's so awkwared but so much fun to read :)
I think I would like to see King Picollo in the story, it would show Vegeta how strong Goku is.
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November 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Read till chapter 4 now, still wonderful :)
Think Vegeta is going to get a shock as to how strong Goku is. Hope he teaches him to fly but knowing Goku even if he doesn't Goku will pick it up anyway.
I like the way Vegeta doesn't know what the smell and warmth mean yet, and look forward to when he does. Hope Goku feels the same :)
Think Vegeta is going to get a shock as to how strong Goku is. Hope he teaches him to fly but knowing Goku even if he doesn't Goku will pick it up anyway.
I like the way Vegeta doesn't know what the smell and warmth mean yet, and look forward to when he does. Hope Goku feels the same :)