rate_review Reviews

Only read chapters one and two so far but am loving it :)

They are totally in character so far and their interactions are very funny. Love how Vegeta is already planning to teach him Saiyan ways and plans to be in control, so like Vegeta, and Goku is just like he was in Dragonball, all niave, inquisitive, and happy go lucky :)

I like the idea of Vegeta and Goku being bonded somehow, either because they're the same species or because they're just drawn to each other. Their antics in the last 2 chapters have been way too cute. Goku already knows how to sense people, right? I wonder what Vegeta's ki looks and feels like to him. Bathtub scene was adorable too, at least until the tail-molesting part by Goku, then it was oh-crap-what-the-hell-have-you-gotten-yourself-into-Goku. I wasn't expecting that. So a tail-grab is an automatic on-switch to Saiyajin libido. And you are evil for that dream-lemon/lime lol! Tho I almost didn't want it to go on because I love how cute and innocent they are...at least how innocent Goku is. Despite my usual story-topics, cuteness is always welcome when it's done right, like in your story. Looking forward to the next ^_^

Also, loved the part when Freeza decides not to kill everyone in that department because it would be too difficult to get replacements, lol.

You did a great job with penning Kakarot's dialogue. It was spot on. In fact, I think you did a great job with all the characters.
I am enjoying k/v interactions [usually I get annoyed]. I look forward to reading how the relationship develops especially with the possibility of Frieza's arrival.

Random Rambling: Ever heard of Katekyo Hitman Reborn? Dear Lord, I was laughing my butt off when I saw the title of your story. I instantly thought Tsuna (Sawada) in nothing but his undies -head lit on fire- screaming "Reborn!"
I said to myself, "Just for that image, I have to click this story!" and I'm not sorry I did. It was an enjoyable read.

~WR

wonderful story I sooooooo wanted Vegeta and Goku to get it on rigth then and there in the bedroom but oh well , maybe next chapter, please let it come soon, please keep writing this deliciousness!!!!

I like it. It's cute and I love how irritated Vegeta is with Goku's crazy level of slap-happy. I don't think Vegeta is out of character, especially since he's a kid, well, a teen and even though Goku is annoying as all Hell, he's still another Saiyajin, which must be comforting especially cuz of the strange surroundings and the terribleness Freeza just put him through, oh, and also the fact that the only other Saiyajins he knows are adults and everyone else is dead. So will loneliness overcome the urge to smack that disturbingly cheerful grin off Goku's face? I'm going to read your other 2 chapters now to find out. ^^

The thoughts were understandable to me. I really like this chemistry between Goku and Vegeta--since they both just met without any background knowledge of the other. And Goku is adorable lol. Really looking forward to where you take this ^_^