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July 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Don't you hate it when you thought you reviewed something you liked and find out you didn't? Le sigh. I've been reading this on and off since you published it. So sorry I haven't reviewed sooner!
To be honest, I think this is my favorite Ed/Win story. Despite the sad circumstances, I love how everything comes together. It's well thought out, simple, and the plot is very believable. The way the two interact throughout the story seems completely natural and I like how Ed is confident and mature, even though he's a virgin, instead of being insensitive and a bumbling idiot. I get tired of him so often being the latter. Also, the whole part when Granny Pinako tells Ed to stuff a sock in it is hilarious.
Overall, I love this oneshot and will continue coming back to read it as long as it stays posted.
XOXO
To be honest, I think this is my favorite Ed/Win story. Despite the sad circumstances, I love how everything comes together. It's well thought out, simple, and the plot is very believable. The way the two interact throughout the story seems completely natural and I like how Ed is confident and mature, even though he's a virgin, instead of being insensitive and a bumbling idiot. I get tired of him so often being the latter. Also, the whole part when Granny Pinako tells Ed to stuff a sock in it is hilarious.
Overall, I love this oneshot and will continue coming back to read it as long as it stays posted.
XOXO
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January 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha!! Nice ending, and story overall! xD