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July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was absolutely enthralled. I was hanging on until the very last word, and was disappointed when it concluded, and yet felt satisfied at the end. It flowed excellently between metaphor and description, but always with the overall theme of the contradiction that is love. I'm going to immediately read your other stories, and I hope they will all be as good as this one. I know you said that you changed your writing style, but you definitely didn't miss the mark.