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Really great chapter! Thank you for updating!

omg! :o this story's getting crazy...and depressing. I know you warned us in the beginning, but still..I was unprepared. It's too bad Krudet died, but at least he tried to help Vegeta get away. By the way, wouldn't that be a bad idea on Decebal's part? I mean...having the prince in that kind of condition and then using him as leverage in front of the Saiyans...the Bakulans? Won't his people see the damage that the guy did to him? It'll be obvious that the man kidnapped him and did whatever to him and why the Saiyans decided to start a war with him. The guy is just digging his grave now...he's also not very wise. :/ I hope things really do get better...a happy ending is in order...there's been one for the past couple sequels, why not this one? :( Ugh you're gonna kill everyone aren't you? I bet the twins are gonna be the only survivors...unless you get heartless and kill them too. XP Aw that's a shame...i mean, good news for you but, not really for the story hehe. Hope it works out for ya. :)

Oh my gods... I just HAD to have fallen in love with your arc RIGHT in my university's week finals, didn't I?
Oh my! I adore this plot! How the enemies come together, the abusive relationships are over, how they start the family, how painful and troublesome was to hear about the miscarriage of Gohan and the way Trunks and Goten aren't always that happy and their own person.

Loved the idea of having another possible war coming over, even if disrupts the peace of the family.

Your actions scenes are amazing, the characters are perfectly depict, I guess you favor more GohanxPiccolo with the scenes (^^ not that I'm complaining) and I adooooooooored how twisted and coming to his senses you portrayed Kudret with your cliffhanger!

I really need to read more of this! And see Goku almighty force brought with the best within him.

I found you on FF .Net, but I'm not sure if you're cutting your M scenes there, so could you mail me from AFF too? jubblesbubbles@hotmail.com

Kisses!

phew! ok, that was bearable hehe. alright it was more than that...jus as long as no one loses anymore limbs >.> that's just...a terrible thing to happen to anyone...i'd rather they die...at least, 'i'd' rather die than lose a limb, that's just...ugh, unbearable...i would think anyway. after i watched history of trunks...ugh, that was jus...brutal man...brutal. so, vegeta's got a plan, but does Goku? Glad one of the Bakulan's have a conscience. It would seem that some of them would be like, 'hey now, we're trying to reunite with the saiyans, not start a war.' i mean, surely war wouldn't be the first that would come to mind to some of them, but then again, saiyans do descend from them. anyway, can't they...i don't know, wish for the king and goten to be who they were before the bakulans and frieza? or you know...somewhere along those lines? :/ its gotta have a happy ending man...happy ending! >< or you know...a bearable ending...like, 'oh okay, that's a pretty good ending' or 'yay! i'm glad it had a happy ending after all :)' you know...something like that? :/ im just worried okay? jus worried... >_> good stuff tho, good stuff! keep going!

I just wanted to say that I really hope you plan on finishing this story! I have been in love with all three of your DBS fan fits and this one seriously needs an ending! It was fantastic so far and I haven't been even the slightest bit disappointed in any new twist. In fact I'm so happy. Have recommended it to a few friends who are starting to really get into it! Here's hoping this reaches you

Ahhhh! Goten! Nooooos! O.o That was terrible! >< I didn't expect something so violent...especially to a minor character :/ then again, it happened all the time in the series. Aw man, I knew the shit was gonna hit the fan soon, I just wasn't prepared for it. Aw. Goten. That's sucks so much. :/ Now its starting to remind me of Sin City. *shudders* Awww, now I feel sorry for Vegeta. Wait, what does he mean by two messages? O.o Oh nos! What's he gonna do to our Saiyan Prince? :o ugh i'm worried now. I don't know if I wanna read this anymore! >< Nah I will. I'll just...cry while I do. >.> You know, I can wait on the update, but at the same time, I need to know what happens...take your time. :)

You've got me at the edge of my seat now! Update quickly... We have to know what happens! :)

Amazing job writing this story, as always!

yay! an update! ^^ it made my day :) so excited for more! such a tease though, waiting until the next chapter to see what's happening to Vegeta. Ah well. I know you'll finish this story. I have high hopes.

*squees* I'm so glad you're keeping up with this story and not giving up yet. ^^ I can't wait to see what happens next! Just when I have a theory, it gets shot, so...I guess I really am gonna have to wait and find out what happens. O.o So much is happening though, it keeps it interesting. :) Ugh don't talk about the ending. >< I never think about the ending...even when writing a story. Well, okay, I have to think about the ending when 'writing' it but when reading it's always far from my mind hehe. Then again I'm not the one writing...I hope that wasn't confusing. >.> Anyways, I know how it feels, you wanna get the story over with, but at the same time, you don't want to lose what you've got going on in the story. The way the characters interact with each other is still sweet and the way they worry over each other is almost tear jerking. When the Saiyans first arrived, I liked how they interacted with Broly and the King. It was intense and...sweet at the same time. x) I guess hehe. I hope its the same with the Bakulans, but more fierce of course 'cuz those guys mean business. O.o I wonder what the other Bakulans are gonna think or do when they realize they're fearless leader is betraying their goal? Then again, if they mutinied, then there wouldn't be much of a climax. Ooooo, I don't know how you're gonna do it hun, but I know you can. Good luck. :)

Fantastic! This is such a great story... And this chapter was particularly good! :D I love how vague everything was in the beginning and how you gradually filled in the details as the chapter progressed. The growing family is wonderful, along with all the drama that seems to be growing with it! :)

Thank you again for sharing your story!