rate_review Reviews

I cannot tell you how much I love this series of yours. It's one of my favorite things. I've read all of what you've posted in this series several times. And I'm SO excited that you're updating this with more frequency. I didn't mind the long waits before because I loved your updates but now it's just like an early present in my email when I get an alert that you updated.(I have Survival of the Fittest on alert on fanfiction.net then come here to read it.) Now I'm getting more frequent presents. :) I can't wait to read more.

oh man...i was so eager for the update, i actually went to fanfiction.net to see if you updated there first and noticed that there was one more chapter there than here, only to realize it was the same one. >< i haven't been reading it on there, so I don't know what all you've done with the chapters...but that was a big tease and it was cruel. >.> Even though I know you had no intention of doing that...or did you? O.o are your chapters getting shorter or am i going crazy? :/ i rather it be the latter. O.o eh, i already know i'm crazy. Anyway, I don't want you to feel 'too' rushed. I mean, i think we all would like to be able to read the chapters hehe. Meaning there being many typos...which is fine! O.o Everyone makes mistakes...er, no mistakes... O.o *coughs awkwardly* uuum...i'll shut up now. >.> And stop mentioning that the ending is coming! I already know it is! >< Everything's gotta end sometime, but you're making it sound like it's coming soon and i'm getting all...fidgety. :/ cruel...you're just cruel...I'm loving it so much right now, I can't wait for more and you're awesome!! :o

Ohhhh. So it's Tarble and Brolly. :D Oh nos! He's already mated! O.o But it looks like you have a solution to that already. Oh man. What's gonna happen next? >< All kinds of scenarios are goin through my head. Aww, I don't want anyone to die. :'( Whether it be Vegeta and Goku or Tarble and Brolly. Besides, those two haven't even been mated yet and they just entered the scene. Perhaps it'll be later in the future? :/ A bond has already been broken, but is it a different bond? Ugh, it's a puzzle. They're interesting, but not when you're dying to know the results. I'm lovin iiiiiit. :3

Thank you for continuing to update your story! As always the plot is very good and so is your writing!

Although I'm sad to hear it's almost reached completion...I'm also happy that we'll get to see what happens! So many good stories go unfinished....

Thanks again and happy writing!

This is a good chapter! You did a great job of introducing the new characters...and the bond killing drug! That's a nice twist!

Keep up the great writing! And happy new year! :)

Just found your story and I just love it! Thanks for updating and keep up the great work!

You updated! :D
I'm so happy to read the new chapters! They're fantastic and I can't wait for more!

Thank you and merry christams! :)

Oh my gawd I've been waiting forever!! >< This story is like crack...I 'needs' it like I need air! So...I think...King Vegeta is the dead man in the chair...annnnd...either Trunks and Goten or Gohan and Piccolo's kid is the leader who is born. O.o Either that or it is Vegeta and it is that obvious. Man, its like a test. I don't know whether to go for the obvious answer or for a more complex one. :/ I would think it'd be the latter, because you are one of the best writers out there and must throw everyone in a loop...instead of giving us the answer right off. Damn it...I guess I'll just have to wait another year for you to update. >< That might be an exaggeration, but that's what it feels like, okay? >.> *sighs in envy* I absolutely LOOOOOVE your writing. It's soooo adorable the way you have all the characters connected and it's absolutely sweet the way they act with one another and the lemons are sooooo extremely tasty. :3 I feel like I've formed a bond with the characters and I just know I'll bawl if anything happens to them. Aw, maybe it is Vegeta. :/ And...the mate that Brolly sees is, perhaps, another son he has? Ugh, its gonna drive me insane! >< I won't rush you 'cuz I know perfection can't be rushed, but please do update before another year goes by. :/

Are Gohan and Piccolo going to have a cub? And what about Trunks and Goten?

I wasn't sure about this story when I started reading the first one but I'm glad I stuck it out. Just wondering though if it is still being updated?