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for Survival of the Fittest

by 2dragonkat

person Zofo
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful reafformation of the bond! A joy to read :)

Glad Raditz is now accepted by all that matter, but engine muck in that amount of hair! Poor Raditz :(
person DragonBallZYaoi92
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! I was soo happy I got to read what happens! Cnt wait for more. Keep up the good work, and thank u for letting us knw why it took so long. I can understand about being busy. Thank u!!
person lamb0luv3r
schedule December 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg come on don't leave it like that I spend three months trying to find this series again and you leave it . Oh wait that was November of this year so your only nearly TWO months late. Hurry up and post please
person DragonBallZFan101
schedule December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!! Cnt wait for more!!! I love ur work!!! Hope to read soon, and have a merry christmas!! ^___^
person Zofo
schedule December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying your new story :)

Was shocked and saddened at Keigo's blindness but thrilled he can sense the world now and is a seer.

Phew! I really thought Goku had lost it there and was going to rape Vegeta, glad he calmed down and now understands Raditz is no threat, but his emotions are still uncontrolled so it's a little worrying.

I was thrilled by the inclusion of Raditz and thought it was sweet that Gohan now has someone who understands what he went through. Good that Picollo understands too. Very curious as to how Raditz was brought back to life and by whom and why. Suppose I was just have to wait for you to tell me :)

Looking forward to reading more :)
person kagecat
schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WHERE IS THE REST?! D8

I mean... i'm not yelling D: because i <3 you...
I just want to know more xD
but I am glad Radditz came back :D and that he's not an ass anymore :3
person dragon96
schedule November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi! It's been awhile since my last review, but I think that your story is coming along really well so far! :) I especially like how you've re-introduced Radditz! I hope he's able to find some happiness....Poor saiyan...He's so sad! Maybe he could wish for his baby back with the dragon balls, since the miscarriage wasn't brought on by natural causes. :( And I am curious about how Radditz came back to life himself... hmmnnn...very interesting.

I'm very happy with how things are going so far for poor Gohan and Piccolo. I think having them and Radditz bonding over their shared experiences was a good idea. It's sad, but sweet. :) And I'm glad that Piccolo didn't overreact to Radditz being alive! I was a little worried that you might have him do something really stupid. This version of him I think was much more in character. :)

Poor Vegeta and Goku! Goku's complete loss of control was really terrible for both of them...! I have a bad feeling that I might know the general direction that this is going to head into.... I'm gonna cross my fingers that it doesn't include character death.... But, considering your story is incorporating Darwin’s theory...Well, where is a story without some drama? ;)

Thanks for a good read! I can't wait to see more! :)

person Dragon
schedule November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story I hope that Radditz finds someone special and that Goku and Vegeta have more babies, Were are Goten and Trunks? I look forward to your next update!!
person Anomlov
schedule November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just read your entire fanfic and I love it! I can't wait to see what you have planned for the meeting with Raditz and Piccolo :) Really an awesome fic!
person Dragon
schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

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