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I'm really glad you're continuing the series, but where are goten and trunks?

Wow I really wasn't expecting Rad in the story but I love how you brought him in. Can't wait for more.

this story is ....well its NOTHING SHORT OF AMAZING!! do u know i cant read any other dbz stroies cause they just dont add up to this one! this story is amazing it has plot its has great sex and its has my fav pairngs gohan/piccolo, goku/vegeta, trunks/goten and now hopefully nappa/radditz omg u are an amazing writer and keep up the good work i mean wow this story is amazing i would pay to read this. and good luck on ur school i to am i school right now i know how hard it can be writing and doing homework. keep up the amazing work
your loyal fan
kougaluv

OMG!!! I loved it! I was NOT expected to see Raditz!!! So cool!! Cnt wait for more. I'm gald ur feeling better. Thank u!!! ^__^

Oh I was so happy to see an update for this truly epic and great fanfic! Plus the Piccolo/Gohan when you add them because Piccolo is my favorite character. And such a wonderful twist to it by adding Radditz. I can't wait to read the next chapter in a few days. Keep up the great work and I hope school goes well for you. I'm sure it must be hard to juggle it all.

Once again another fabulous story on your part. I'm anxious to see what happens next and also hope we'll see more Gohan and Piccolo. Until then I will patiently await your next update which will hopefully be soon.

loved it! But when is da update? Da due date for it was supposed to b 2 days ago.

Ahhh!I can't wait until the next chapter. I read both other ones and I can't wait now. You're amazing. I love the "seeing" with his ki. Interesting.

I can never get enough of your stories. I love them! Adore them! Could eat them as if they were bowls of Raman! Even probably bear-hug them until they wiggle out of my grip like my darling cat Mau...yeah I think you get my point. Anyways because I'm one who talks alot, I have to let you know that I'm currently re-reading A Saiyain Way of Life (already re-read Alternate Reality and Alternate Reality: Drabbles) and I'm on the last chapter (cries) but I always look forward to re-reading the entire series again...and again and again, ect.. I really can't find any other good DBZ fanfictions with Goku and Vegeta as a pairing, except yours- which has plot, character depths and everything I think a wonderful story needs (I thank you and all your muses and those who helped you with these stories- they're Angels of Writers or something). And let me tell you, your stories (AR, SWOL and SOTF) are exactly what I've been wishing had happpen in the real DBZ series, word for word. Jesus christ, this is a long review for me, but I look foward to when you update (please, at your own pace) and to let you know, I have become a huge fan of yours.

Write with all the imagination that's built up in your mind and let your fingertips pass on the wonders of your magic to unwavering, zealous readers
-Goddess of Creators (Shine kure on fanfiction)
p.s. Yes, I know. I'm somewhat off my rocker.

OMG!!! I loved it!!!! Thank u!! I love ur stories! Cnt wait for more! Thanks again!! ^__________________^