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schedule April 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good!!! Please continue it! I really wanna see what happens next. Update please please please!!!
schedule October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very well written, I plowed through the whole thing in one go! You have a very strong grasp on the characters themselves and an excellent handle on phycology. I have laughed (Trowa smells soooo good), gotten angry, and am hoping I won't have to cry. All the hallmarks of a very good story. I know It's been a year since this was updated, but as a writer I know how long it takes, so I'm holding out for more!! Especially more cat-duo, meeeeow that's a hot image!!
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So....what happens? ^__^ I can't wait to read more!
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
pardon my french but holy shit! i just spent most of the day reading this and i can't believe it, i couldn't stop!

i'm amazed to say that everyone is very believable, even Heero. even with the timejump it seemed alittle odd at first, but once the flashbacks came in it was alot easier to accept. i'll admit i'm shocked at what you did to Zechs, but it really works at showing how much Heero's stayed connected to everyone but Duo. oh man Duo... i love the dude to death(pun intended) but man it both sucks and makes so much sense. still don't get why he had Kitten created, but that's coming later, right?

Kitten sounds so cute and sweet, reminds me alot of my nephew. i love the interaction between him and Heero; his attachment and protectiveness work well and Heero's always been a rock, it's nice to see him focusing on being Kitten's. the images on the two on a road trip made me smile.

i love what you've done so far, and i'm not pushing for anything.(suddenly become a fan on the not-so-happy ending) but i'm anxiously waiting for more.

btw love Kitten's name... Cromm Cruach... *snickers*
schedule November 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dude where is the update?! You're as bad as me with updating! LOL.
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very good last chap so far! This story is addicting. Good plot and good paicng
schedule October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
New and different
schedule October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Called the number, hilarious!!
schedule October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Talk about a countdown.

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