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by Deb

person Feidragon
schedule March 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was glued to the computer until I finished reading this story. So much fun with the boys being cowboys! There is so much in here that made me want to start laughing like a crazy person, but then my house mate would stare at me like a crazy and loudly inform me that he DOES NOT want to know. I love that you gave the horses so much personality too, they were characters, not props. Thank you so much for posting this!
person Djargo
schedule January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story though I kinda hated to see it end. I think Heero and Duo were super sweet together. I liked how you took it slow and never rushed their relationship. Considering Heero's inexperience, you waited until it felt right for them to take that final step.
The part in epilouge describing Wing's and Scythe's turns with the mares made me laugh. Who would have thought after all their bluster that Scythe was a"one minute stud" or Wing could ahve a way with the ladies^_^.

Thank you for taking the time to share your story and I look forward to your next one.
person yuuki-chan
schedule December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great as always. It is nice to see the boys finally getting together. It is also nice to see Duo coming out on top, in more ways than one. Keep up the great work and many thanks for a wonderflu story.
schedule November 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dear SheLong,

Our friend HieikuYoko referd us to your story. She said she loved it and we just had to read it.
Well we all got together today and did just that. We must say she was right we enjoyed this story. All eight of us agree we would love to find out who wins. We love the depth of your characters and their relationships. We are veary happy how thinsturned out with Raven. We are against animal abuse and killing. So we are gladeyou found an alternative. Yes we are aware he was dangerous.

your fans,

Kidomi, Min, Kaioda, DB, Vlad, Sarason, Solo, and Yuki
The RoundRobinTeam.
person Djargo
schedule October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree with Meiran;Heero and Duo are so sweet together^^. I enjoyed how much more comfortable Heero was with showing affection and humor with Duo.
Although this showdown of sorts was inevitable, I hate that Duo is going to have ride Reaper again. Bad enough he's not fully healed,now he has to deal with literal interpretation of getting back on the horse that threw him. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Djargo
schedule September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Warm fuzzies abound! What a sweet chapter^_^. I love that Heero finally realized what he wanted and went for it. Those first steps into a serious commitment are both exhilarating and terrifying but fun.
person Cee
schedule September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love that. Scythe and Wing are a riot in chap31. Wing just walks down the ramp like he owns the place until Scythe tells him off.

I pitied Duo for a moment when he thought Heero was about to break up with him. I don't blame him for feeling that way with Heero's lead-in to the conversation! Poor guy!
person Djargo
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay. Anyone want to guess what horse Meiran is talking about? And a little weird is an understatment when it comes to Dorothy. That girl is just flat out nuts!
person Djargo
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Those verdicts couldn't have happened to two more deserving women. Trowa summed it up best when pointed out the irony of their actions. Everything they did to try and destroy Duo and Heero brought them closer together. The cherry on top was all the fines they're paying will help fund Duo's dream not destroy it.
person Djargo
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow,a blowjob cliffhanger. That's one way to keep readers coming back for more^_^. I really like this getting to know you/getting comfortable phase that Heero and Duo are doing. You do a good job of showing the beginning of a relationship,where you're still kind of feeling each other out.

I really would like to know the color of the sky in Relena's world if she thinks Dorothy is going to see the light of day any time soon. Something is seriously wrong with her if she doesn't realize tha Dorothy's actions show she's one taco short of combo platter.

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