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I like the image in my head of Quatre being domestic and making Trowa breakfast, as well as the threat that he better eat it.

Okay, when I first saw this pop up on the recently updated fic list, I'll admit that I bypassed it with thoughts along the line of 'oh gawd, not another Brokeback Mountain w/ (insert couple here) fic.' But I've come back and read it and I gotta say, this is a damn good story. Your detailing in the psychological diagnosis and familiarity with the rodeo and rodeo-esque behavior really adds some extra depth. Thank you for taking the time to post/update this wonderful story, please do so again when you have the time and inspiration to do. :)

Relena's belief that she did nothing wrong and wouldn't be charged was boggling. Maybe Dorothy wasn't the only one who needed a psychiatric evaluation.
The one good thing that came out of this Relena/Dorothy mess was that it put any doubts in Heero's mind to rest. It just comfirm that he really wanted to be Duo's boyfriend. I liked that this chapter showed Heero that he has help and support from Quatre,Trowa,and Wufei.

All right, now let's see Dorothy try to wrangle her way out of this one.

It must be hard for Heero right about now to step into Duo's world and deal with people's reactions to him being gay, let alone their new status as a couple. I'm glad he's being open about it and supportive of his partner. YAY! Duo sounds like he would look cute in his hospital scrubs.

SMACKDOWN! Quatre doesn't mess around!

Miracles of freaking miracles,Relena finally got that Heero no longer loved her. It just took seeing Duo and Heero attacked by a crazed horse to get it to sink in.
And speaking of crazed,I don't think Reaper was the only one off their rocker. Dorothy seemed more vindictive about Heero leaving Relena for Duo than Relena. I don't know if she thought that cutting that rope was supporting Relena in her time of distress or if she'd just gone off her nut but the double bitch slaps*Go Quatre* were well deserved. Not exactly dragged behind a horse but by the time the the cops and rodeo council finish with her she might wished she had been. I also can hardly believe that Relena owned up to some of her spiteful pettiness. She has to realize she in the same boat as Dorothy minus the actual rig tampering though it was her idea in a way.

Looking forward to the next chapter. It's going to interesting seeing Heero deal with injured,cranky Duo.

My heart was beating so fast as I read this chapter. You did a great job of balancing the tense moments and the action of the story. It would seem Dorothy's plan partially backfired. Yes, Duo got injured but instead of that sending Heero running to Relena,it only solidified his desire to stay with Duo. I only hope there are no complications in Duo's recovery.

I really hope Charlie finds out it was Dorothy who cut the rope. Her punishment should include her being tied behind Reaper for a little bit. This may sound harsh but fitting,I think, for someone with so little regard for life or the consequences of their actions. Looking forward to the next chapter.

This story is so good! I was hanging on my seat during Duo's fall, and I didn't finally lean back until the ambulance left the ring.

Too many good things to describe. I'm so glad you've been updating this fic, which is one of my favorites. I hope Relena gets a clue that her stubbornness and foolish pride got someone seriously hurt. You've made me feel strongly about these characters, definitely.

GAH! DUO! I knew that Dorothy was up to no good! I was hanging on the edge of my seat for chapter nineteen. I love that Heero tried not to deny his bond with Duo in front of the reporters despite that it could ruin them both to confess.

Please tell me there's more coming soon? REALLY soon? Pretty please with whipped cream-covered Duo on top???

Reading this chapter had my nerves going crazy. When Relena showed up with those reporters I was glad that Heero didn't deny Duo. He made it clear that he was never Relena's fiance and didn't love her at all.

I KNEW that dirty heifer Dorothy was going to do something like this! My heart was pounding during Duo's ride and almost stopped when his reins gave way. You really know how to leave readers begging for more. Can hardly wait for your next chapter.