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Good to see that no matter how self-deluded Relena is she's not psychotic enough to kill...yet. Considering she hangs out with Dorothy and they seem to be of like mind,I wonder how far away she could be from pulling a complete nutter.

There were a couple of ominous moments,in this chapter,that were worrying. Duo pulling Reaper doesn't bode well. Also,Dorothy and Relena showing up along with Dorothy causual mention of taking out Duo permanently,even if Relena nixed the plan, makes me wonder if Dorothy's crazy enough to try to carry out that plan on her own. Still enjoying this story and looking forward to the next chapter.

Dun-dun-DUNNNNHHH!! *cue suspenseful music*

I'm enjoying this. Dorothy is a psycho. It's so funny that Relena thinks Duo "tainted" Heero.

Duo's pet names made me giggle. Snookums and stud muffin in particular. It'd be funny if a big, bad bronc rider answered to Cupcake.

Such scenes of sweet domestic bliss^^. I liked how well the guys get along even if Scythe and Wing are having personality issues. I guess this is the calm before the storm that is Dorothy and Relena show up to rain on their parade or rodeo to be more apt.

"Duo began to surface from a very pleasant dream, one which involved a blue eyed cowboy, some whipped cream and a large tube of lube." that was hysterical. I'll be interested to see the dynamic between them when they get more physically involved, especially considering the rivalry between their horses, whose personalities are similar. Duo and Scythe are both show-offs, aren't they? :)

Oh,no! The dispicable two are together again. Individually,Relena and Dorothy are awful but together they create a perfect storm of heinous. I fear the ideas these two will come up with to get Heero back.

I wonder if it's weird that I find Scythe's and Wing's bitchy,territorial attitudes towards each other funny? I get a tickle out of their inner thoughts. 'What's with the spots'indeed^^.
I think the guys first intimacy beyond kissing was handled well. It wasn't too rushed or overly intense;just sweet. Looking forward to the next chapter.

That scene in the parking lot was H-O-T. Duo and Heero weren't the only only ones getting all warm and flushed^_^. I adore how you write these guys together. They're both so sweetly sensual and sexy .

I can't believe Relena is so in denial;talk about selective memory. She chose to ignore all the signs that everything was not well in her relationship. When the end came,it wasn't her fault but the fault of a head injury. Wonder what color the sky is in her world?

Looking forward to more sweet cowboy love^^.

I have hot, tingly fuzzies running over my skin after reading the scene with the boys in the parking lot. Whoo!

And to quote Duo, "Yee Haw!"

I love that Relena thought the problem was Heero getting a blow to the head. How funny is that?

It's funny to see Duo taking the lead so much in this fic, when I always think of Heero as a subtle yet aggressive character when I read him in other people's stories, but they're both lovable here. I hope there is more to come of these two being nice and naughty.

This chapter made me stomp my feet in my seat. I love that Relena had a very egotistical, clueless reaction to why she was being dumped. Heero didn't even make a big deal about "I'm in love with someone else" or "I have the hots for Duo." It was just "This isn't working out. We want different things." And she STILL went psycho. I hope the boys don't get too comfy with their burgeoning bond, she's about to upset the applecart.

But in the meantime, if you wanted Heero to kiss Duo "properly" again, I wouldn't mind... *nudge*

I almost felt sorry for Relena as she overheard/saw Heero and Duo until her first thought was of how Heero leaving her for Duo would look to others. There were no thoughts of losing someone she loves just how she could inflict the most hurt.
I shudder to think of the vileness she is going to come up with to try an keep the guys apart.

Oh no! The smell of brimstone should've alerted them to Relena's presence^^. Seeing as how Duo and Heero can't keep away from each other this eventually had to happen. I just hope they make it to the next rodeo intact. Relena strikes me as the 'if I can't have you no one will' type of possessive nut. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.