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GAH! She SAW! Oh, no!

I love this chapter with the troublemaking horses and the tension between the boys. Trowa being protective of Duo made me grin, too. Duo needs a spanking for that naughty drink order!

this story is really amazing! I check back rather requently, anxious to see what is going to happen. i love the development of the characters through the plot line, and the story itself is very humorous - i love the play on the stereotype of the gay cowboy lol can't wait to see how they get rid of Relena and how Heero enjoys being gay =P

Cowboy + low-riding black jeans = one seriously hot combination^^.
This was a great chapter. I loved the whole signal passing/friends willing to run interference scenario it took to get Heero and Duo some time alone. And who wouldn't want the type of relationship they described;I know I do. I really liked how it was the "prize" that finally decided Heero. It was sweet touch. Looking forward to the next update.

This made my day. I love that Duo has a pair of nice girlfriends who have his back to provide the proper "distraction" to give him some time with Heero. I also love Duo's trip to the bar to get the beer, with ass-pinching and marriage proposals following in his wake. That's priceless. Nothing like a sexy cowboy in black jeans!

Thanks for the updates. They're like candy to me. Seriously.

Okay, how much more in denial can Relena get? Really, once you can't trust your boyfriend to go to the bathroom alone you have to admit there are some issues within the relationship. Even though I still feel slighty sorry for her,I can't wait until Heero tells her it's over. The longer he puts it off, the worse it will be.
On a positive note,Duo and Heero are just adorable. The flirting,constant glimpses of each other,and all around giddiness when they're together takes me back to that first flush of when you're crushing hard on someone. I absolutely love your writing. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and seeing what prize is collected^^.

"Let me know what you want for your prize." *rubs hands together gleefully* I love this story. These boys are so cute. I still have to feel a little bad for Relena. It's hard for someone possessive to realize that their behavior is what pushes their love away from them while they're trying to hang on. Duo calling her "the leech" made me giggle, even though maybe someone else in Heero's position would have kicked his butt for insulting his girl, at least on principal. But it's very telling that he laughed instead. Says a lot about how he and Relena are unraveling at the seams.

I'm a huge fan of yours and this fic is turning out great! I can't wait to see where you go next! Great job!!

"Shit, I'm so screwed." Classic. Poor Heero. I love the dialogue in this chapter, and I love the flirting, even though it was relatively subtle, but you have this neat sense of anticipation, watching Relena slowly catch on. I want to feel badly for her, but I want her to get the message and get out, too. Thanks for updating this story. It makes me grin widely every time I see it at the top of the index page with a new chapter.

OMG,the dinner coversation was too funny. The double-entendres were flying pretty good between Duo and Heero. I can't blame Duo for choking with the ever-thick Relena adding fuel to the fire by being totally clueless to what was going on. I'm so glad that Duo knows Heero is interested and is willing to be there for him as he figures things out.

Okay,I'm officially over feeling sorry for Relena. She is truly oblivious to how condesending she sounds. She talks to Heero like his thoughts and dreams are foolish;not based in the reality like her's are. All her supposed support seems kind of back-handed now. It's almost like she travels with Heero just to keep an eye on her relationship investment and to be able to constantly remind him of how he could be hurt again.

Rlena is so screwed and not in the good way^^. Oh man, I never thought I could feel bad for Relena but I do. She really is nice and just trying to be a good girlfriend.
I'm glad Heero is having honest realizations about himself and his feelings for Duo but Relena is going to receive the really crappy end of that stick.

I like how Scythe and Wing are trying to show each other who's top dog. They're as competitive with each other as their masters are inside the arena. *snort* Duo-sexual. You should petition for that to added to the list of sexual preferences^_^. It would definitely make for an interesting selection.