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by Deb

person Originalceenote
schedule December 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*claps* "stuff organized." That's so cute. This chapter was funny, and I loved the insights both men had into thier dilemma. "Duo-sexual." That's perfect. I like that Heero could pin down that his feelings were specific to one man. I feel bad for Relena, and I love the building tension.
person CeeCee
schedule December 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is so much fun so far.
person Originalceenote
schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy any update you make to this story. I love how the horses were reacting to the chemistry and rivalry between their riders,and I love the budding relationship between Trowa and Quat, how low-key they both are. It's just nice. I haven't touched my own Gundam story in months, so I'm procrastinating by reading everyone else's. Relena's jealousy makes me smile a bit and feel a little sorry for her. She isn't a bad girlfriend, she just isn't right for Heero. Good work.
person originalceenote
schedule November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Yeah, yeah, clown boy, laugh it up." Love that.
person icejade
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story so far - then again, I've liked all of your stories! I especially like that you are writing something in the horse genre as I was sad to see "Going for Gold" and that story line end. Cannot wait for for the next chapter!
person CeeCee
schedule October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This second chapter was so much fun to read. I love Duo and Reaper sizing each other up and him catching that mean white glint in his eye. It's great that you introduced two more pilots in this installment, too. Heero's troubled relationship with Relena feels very real, and it makes me pity her. Good job.
schedule October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm extremely interested!! Cant wait to see how the relationship between our favourite two boys begins to develop. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!!
schedule October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far. Very well done, interesting spin on the Gundam Wing boys (and the series itself, for that matter) and I'd like to read more.
person yuuki-chan
schedule October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Let it live a while longer. It seems as if it might have some fireworks potential when Heero and Duo meet face to face, and the ensuing explosion from Relena when she doesn’t make the 8 seconds and gets dumped in the dirt. So let it run wild and good luck with it.
person snowdragonct
schedule October 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You absolutely MUST continue! This is a wonderful idea, and your stories are always a lovely combination of excitement and tension and lovely, lovely lust. Plus, you are SO good with anything in the horse genre that I imagine your rodeo broncs will end up characters in their own right!

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