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February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story doesn't really seem plausible. I mean, why would Goku take on such a humiliating job occupation? Remember, this is the kid that lived for most of his life out in the wilderness. He could fend for himself, he caught his own fish, he made his own clothes, he hadhis own little cabin. Logically, it just doesn't make sense that he would turn into a life of prostitution, stripping...
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February 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'll admit the beginning was kind of a turn-off for me since I didn't like the idea of a bottom Vegeta or Goku becoming a rapist, but the chapters that followed were fantastic! I loved it, and Goku's a bottom! Sorry, I'm kinda biased about positions so if you plan to continue this fic, which would be awesome, could you put up a warning or something if they suddenly switch? Anyway, wonderful job with the story! Hope you keep updating! Can't wait for the rest. :) *hugs, blood, and chocolate*
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January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh the lemon was so hot!
I like this story, very well written!
I like this story, very well written!
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December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking how Vegeta is seeing this as a battle and determined to get what he wants, also how he seems to be controlling it at the moment. I'd like to know more about how Goku feels and why he signed the note Kakarot.
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December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good one so far. I like how you keep them pretty much in character. Keep going!
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December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awww Vegeta is winning Goku over little by little and he doesn't notice it yet. I love that movie. Die Hard, Die Hard 2, Die Hard with a Vengence <--- my personal favorite, and Live Free Die Hard if i remember right. ^^ anyways great chapter.
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November 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loving it so far :)
Will Vegeta leave now or was Goku a drug he can't resist? Can't wait to find out :)
Will Vegeta leave now or was Goku a drug he can't resist? Can't wait to find out :)
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November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*Drools* so hot. i can't wait for more. :D
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November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:D wow. lols Vegeta getting drunk. Great story so far can't wait to read more ^^