rate_review Reviews

I keep coming back to this story cause it's such an interesting take on the psychologies of the characters, and of undercover work in general. Also the hot bits are super hot! I know that real life tends to get in the way, but I hope you continue writing soon. lol you definitely still have an adoring audience.

I'm really glad that you continued this story, but I'm so angry you didn't finish the story. Ahhh! I wanted to see what happened when Trowa got back from his mission. I wanted to know how Duo and Quatre handle things without him around. Such a tease. Needless to say, this is a really great story. You continued the amazing characterization from the first fic. I've loved getting into Trowa's head and see the exploration of him as a character. Once again your sex scenes are incredible. They're sexy and so touching and filled with love. Oh I wish you would pick this fic back up again.

Gaaah! I hate that Trowa still thinks he needs to be punished and becoming this character will in no way that change his mind. This a persona that even Trowa despises. That being said, this was great chapter.

I liked how you showed that with each layer of prep he became less Trowa and more Sabian. How to sucessfully infiltrate he has to shut down every part of him that he has worked so hard to open up. I have a feeling the darker parts of this tale will have us looking at some characters differently. Looking forward to next chapter.

Sorry to hear things are so hectic but hopefully you're not stressing yourself too much about updates. By now any of your readers know that you push and critique yourself harder than any reviewer could^^. Give yourself a little break because we know a good story takes time.

YAY!! AN UPDATE!!! so freaking excited to see one, i love this fic! gods i cant wait to see exactly what this new persona takes from trowa and how duo and quatre deal with being a duo (pun intended lol) for a while ^.^ please keep writing, i love it and can't wait for more!

YOU UPDATED!!! *flails* I have been bad and not reviewing the last .. at least the last few chapters. but i wanted to let ya know that I feel you're doing these characters pretty well. I mean.. some writers seem to forget the GW boys are complex solfiers, fighters, and when you've got someone like Trowa and Duo, used to getting into the thick of things, fighting dirty or going deeply undercover, it changes that person fundamently. And to see Trowa struggle to open himself up only to have to shut completely down again for the mission.. makes me want to cry. The guilt and burdens all of them carry.. even little Quatre, the darling, who is not near so timid and innocent as some make him to be, i swear... it's just all awesome. I have a feeling the chapters through the mission and until you bring Trowa home are going to pick my heart to little pieces.

I really enjoy this fic. It is always worth the wait. I will wait paicently for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work!!!! HUGS!!! <3

I love this story! Your attention to detail is just amazing. I can't wait till the next chapter, even if it's a ways off... the wait is always worth it for this story!

-till then!

Wonderful story, and chapter. I've been waiting for your update. I'm very much looking forward to Trowa's mission and what happens next. I look forward to the next chapter.

This was a great chapter *eleven* I've been hoping you would write a "prep" scene so we could see Trowa physically get into character. It was funny to see Quat and Duo interacting with Leason, too, to the extent that Trowa would let them. This chapter had a nice tension, and you felt bad for Trowa, knowing what he has to step away from during his mission, knowing he has to plunge himself back into that loneliness.

What a slugger^_^! That was hot and then some. Duo was admirable in his directing debut. The scene read sexy and organic but definitely not corny. I love how they spent the day being as cuddly and close as possible.
I must say I enjoyed Trent's snarky remarks though he might be setting himself up for a classic verbal slap down by Trowa if he keeps it up.