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Happy Easter!

And you're welcome. Philosophical assistance is always here when you need it!

I love Trowa's darker side that was shown in this chapter, though I have a feeling that he will be going a lot lot darker. And you know, where he was trying to sample what his 'crew' would be like in an explosive and 'risque' situation with his fluctuating moods, that was something I'd never really though about before and totally makes sense!

I really am looking forward to the next update but I'm praying so hard that everything is turning out ok for you now.

Zx

I've just gone through the prequel and this in one sitting. Kudos to you for going for psychological realism in a threesome! I love the layered, complex Trowa you're slowly drawing for us, and the contradictory blend of fragility and iron-strength that is Duo's emotional core. Didn't like Quatre so much at the start, but I'm starting to like him more as the strategist returns. The smex is hot -- I'm not sure if it's just that it's my kink so I respond better to it or if you really do write Trowa dominating Duo even better than anything else. I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with the plot -- is it too much to hope that Duo ends up having to interact with Trowa's undercover persona? As Duo is a field agent, I figure it is possible... with Q back at HQ, finding a way to keep them both alive. And as a matter of policy, I never trust Zechs...
My big quibble is how quickly Quatre found lust and romantic feelings for Duo. I'll buy the speed of the relationship between Trowa and Duo -- the similar backgrounds, the complementary kinks, both of them have holes in them that the other fills. (By the way, I found Duo's negotiating for a kiss after the sex in chapter 2 to be a beautiful and telling detail about the kinds of relationship's Duo's had in the past, and how little his needs were respected in them....)
You also have a few problems with homonyms... "site" is a location, "sight" is a view. But overall, brava and I look forward to reading more!

interesting read, curious to see where this is going, waits for more!

ah i can't wait to see what happens between trowa and duo!! the mission sounds amazing and the psychological stuff is so intense!! and of course, duo wants to play spy, it's his favorite game =P it's all really good!i hope life slows down so you can update soonest =D

We're getting closer to the big bust! It's so exciting! I'm dying to see Trowa in his role, you write so well that it's almost...believable. I actually feel like I'm there with the characters...maybe as a ghost or something...we'll see lol. Some authors have started creating forums to answer reviews and linking to it on their story page. Don't know if that helps?

I'm sad life's being sucky, but all clouds have a silver lining. I don't know what's going on in your life but I find that philosophy works for almost everything.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Zx

Oh, always something new...a bit of a twist. I loved this chapter.

I automatically hated Trent, which means you did a fabulous job of introducing him. I'd love to watch Duo or Quatre match wits with him, I enjoyed the dialogue in that scene and Duo's reactions to him, and his own internal monologue.

And Zechs made me laugh. Subtle, but effective.

Words cannot express how musch I enjoyed Trent's introduction. He has all the makings of a character you want to dislike but secretly have a soft spot for. I liked how their interactions left Duo flat-footed and squirming like a worm on a hook. Never seen Duo Maxwell on the short side of any conversation. Usually the only one that does that to him like is Trowa. Great work,I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Yay new chapter!!! and i like the new guy :) nice and sneaky in a very trowa sort of way lol can't wait to see what else you've got planned!!

Oh my gosh, that was beyond smutty and so damn good. Trowa is sexy incarnate. He can be commanding/demanding with Duo and Quatre yet still tender. Speaking of Quatre, our little feather has come a long way since the beginning of this relationship. I totally agree with Trowa that confidence is so sexy. And do I have to mention,although I will, that Duo is just a wet dream come true^_^. Hope I manage to convey how I thouroughly enjoyed every syllable of this chapter. I think the boys earned the extended sex since Trowa is going away so don't feel bad about there not being lots of plot. Looking forward to the next chapter.