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by Aestas

schedule February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I know what you mean. Not the best of formats, though I've not actually uploaded anything in it yet but hey ho. I'm beginning to think there's a serious problem with the GW side of the site as I didn't see chapter 3. Best thing is I got to read two chapters. Bad thing is I thought it took you two months to update so I was about ready to pounce and complain :P.

Chapter 3 was fab, you really get a feel for how much this final mission means to all three of them. Chapter 4 was...well...smutty. Which is a change, nice though :) torturous :P.

I'd actually missed your stories so much I re-started Two Sides of a Triangle last night...please don't leave it another month to update?? I want to read it so bad! No complaints with these two chapters, love them both and no spelling or grammar mistakes that I've picked up!

Zx
person animecrazed117
schedule February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I followed this story from the "2 sides of a triangle" and I just love the development of this story. I am continually amazed by the development of the characters! the psychological, the emotional, the relationship - ah, its all so good!! I look forward to Trowa's mission and the impact it has on him (he's my fave g-boy lol) and his return to their relationship. and you are sheer jeanius with the lemons - can't wait to find out quatre's kink ^^ please update soon!
schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i realise i revied earlier but since you updated i reread some of your other fics :) (namely Break Me Down, My Ride Home and Becoming Whole) and i felt the need to tell you again that you write the most fantastic Trowa i've ever had the privilege to read and i absolutely love all i've read of your work. The wonderful style and thought you put into your work is a pleasure to read and i enjoy every sentance of it! So thanks for doing what you do and i can't wait for more :)
person Djargo
schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*melt* I'm am so a puddle right now. The exchange between Trowa and Quatre left me with wonderful warm fuzzies. I loved how you used that simple touch to show Trowa's growing affection and ease with Quatre. And I liked that Quatre was more his old self,able to see the bigger picture, when Trowa told him about having to be alone those last few days. Even though he didn't like it as long as it helped Trowa come back safe he could accept it. Also, I could've just hugged Trowa when he realized what he had been feeling was lonliness but Quatre beat me to it^_^.

I know this may be redundant,since many others have commented on it,but that bedroom scene was H-O-T. Then you took it up a notch when Trowa broke out the silk ropes. *fanning self* Can hardly wait to read the next chapter to see what fun the guys get up to.
person wow!
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that lemon was hot! can't wait for Trowa to get his turn. very well written. thanks!
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohhhh!!!! Updates!!!! (and it was an incredibly hot update!) i liked how you had Quatre handle the news! it proves he really is back to the old smart Quatre :D and i loved how you had Duo play on Trowa's voyer kink with the contest. it will make Trowa's part all the sweeter! (which i can't wait to read being very appreciative of that particular kink) please hurry and write more? i can't wait to see where else ou take this!
person CeeCee
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*wiggles eyebrows* When life throws Aestas lemons, Aestas makes Gundam smut!

I love the tiny gestures, like Trowa rubbing up against Quatre when he helped with the groceries. Reminds you of a cat purring to be petted only until it's sick of the contact, but it still wants the attention. I enjoyed Quat's reflections of Trowa's solitude and how he realizes that Trowa actually needs them now, even if he won't admit it out loud. You can see little things slipping through, like Trowa becoming more affectionate. It's almost a shame that he will have to take that away soon, and that you wonder how much he will change when he comes back.

I understand about real life sometimes affecting your fic. I've been blocked lately, wondering if my older stories will still hold up to updates if I can't get back into the groove, when I've been so distracted lately. But too much time on the PC isn't healthy, either, so at times, my fic gets in the way of real life, too, when I can't afford for it to. It happens. Write when the urge hits you, but hopefully everything else you're dealing with untangles itself.
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeeeees, Duo and bondage! The BEST!
person Anon
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it! But now I'm so very curious...what is Quatre's secret fetish? Have you decided yet? Can you give us a hint? Ahh I'm excited for the sex scene and the plot!
person Ayana
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
dear I loved the first story and now the second..you have to continue if not for anyone else but yourself and me ^-^

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