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for Sacrifice

by xerosky

person erika
schedule September 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hello, this is one of the best stories i've ever read and i really wish you could finish it. I hope you haven' t lost your inspiration and continue this amazing work. Please don' t forget it, it' s an original idea and so far is very very good. Thank you.

person IuvenesL
schedule January 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I believe you started posting this one around the time I disappeared from the fandom a few years back. It's beautiful as always; I hope you finish it one day, because you're still the best writer in this fandom. Don't ever forget it! (I certainly won't.)
person TristaML
schedule September 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really wish there was an update on this... it's brilliant
person anon
schedule September 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aw, please come back :(
person Guest
schedule May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's almost a year, would there be more? I hope you didn't abandon this. Please come back soon
person TristaML
schedule June 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I want to say that you've posted this story once before...? I recall your name from a few years back, still I am so happy to read it and I can't remember exactly what happens anyways or if I ever finished it.

I like the dynamics between the characters and how you've added Raditz and Turles into the mix. It makes sense that Goku's appearance into this world wouldn't go completely unnoticed and I want to see what you do with it.
I did have a question though, if Goku cannot travel to the same place twice in time, how come he can go back to this particular Vegetasei when Vegeta turns 19? Not that I'm complaining, maybe I misunderstood exactly what happened- and in any case it doesn't matter.
Anyways, I think it's interesting that you have all of these people of Prince Vegeta's side, sort of helping him through his rather odd situation regarding this "legendary"

Great stuff!!
person Zofo
schedule June 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thought they were going to do it in the shower, but I guess it's not time yet, intrigueing though that Kakarot no longer sleeps on the couch :)

Kakarot is really trying to learn enough to cope with the royal lifestyle, not sure Vegeta understands how difficult it is for him. Hope Vegeta opens his heart soon :)
person Broten
schedule May 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh hi you're my favorite ever, mkay? No seriously, I think this is the most brilliant fanfic I've ever read. Please, do continue.
person DeDay
schedule May 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yes you updated. I like your Vegeta and Im glad that he isnt crazy enough to take the painful root of becoming a supersaiyan. I also like the fact that thia Vegeta is doing baby steps in this courtship with Kakarot and see that he is starting to accept him.
I love this fic and hope you update soon
person darkshadowarchfiend
schedule March 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!! I love this story!!!!!!!!

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