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March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah, this is lovely~ Very descriptive! Aw, Goku died at the end... very sad, but quite effective :3
I love the way you've portrayed Vegeta in this as well! Keep writing :)
I love the way you've portrayed Vegeta in this as well! Keep writing :)
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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
o_o Omg why didn't I see this sooner?! I. LOVE. EVIL. VEGETA. he doesn't get enough play. awesome fic.
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March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
kjhsdf This is the firt fanfiction I've read that Kakarot actually gets killed after Vegeta's finished, which is honestly how I think it would go, especially in this sort of AU universe, which I'm assuming takes place on planet Vegeta, as Kakarot has his tail, and other things. I could be wrong though.
Either way, it was pretty awesome. Kept me intrigued the whole time. <3
Either way, it was pretty awesome. Kept me intrigued the whole time. <3
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March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! You need to write more stories :)
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March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, well written and easy to read. I just feel bad for poor Kakarotto dying in the end. But, hey, that made the victory complete.
P.S.: Thank you for your review on my story. I'm glad to see that I'm not the last DBZ writer here that is active. I hope to read more form you and I will try to update my own story asap.
P.S.: Thank you for your review on my story. I'm glad to see that I'm not the last DBZ writer here that is active. I hope to read more form you and I will try to update my own story asap.
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February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, poor Goku! Nasty nasty Prince :(
Good rape fic :)
Good rape fic :)
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January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Bawww! I can't believe he killed Goku! .... BAWWWW!!!
Aside from that sad ending, I think you did a great job for your first DBZ fic. Especially considering you thought yourself to be rusty. I'm really looking forward to more from you! It's always nice to see new writers in this fandom. They seem to be twindling!
Aside from that sad ending, I think you did a great job for your first DBZ fic. Especially considering you thought yourself to be rusty. I'm really looking forward to more from you! It's always nice to see new writers in this fandom. They seem to be twindling!
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January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What the heck is 'twindling'?? XP! I meant dwindling.