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June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I have to disclaim my review by saying that I've never seen DBZ, and don't know much of anything about the show, but I wanted to read some of your stuff since I try to make a point to review people who have reviewed me... Anyway, I can say that the story was damn hot, just enough of a tease to make me want more... and it managed to be engaging even though I don't know anything about the characters. I felt like I got a good idea of their personalities, even in such a short space.
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February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was surprised at the happy ending as I was sure Frieza would do something worse, but glad Zarbon got off :)