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October 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please write more!!! I want to know what happens next!!!
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February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying the fic, and can't wait for the next chapter!
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this will be the third time I try to review your story. For some reason it just doesn't take.
I really enjoyed your fic...very original. I love reading how Raditz interacts with Sage during this stressful encounter with Zarbon. Hopefully Zarbon's childhood friend can give them a hand. I think it would be interesting to see what would happen if Vegeta got thrown into the mix. I know he's "talking" with Freeza, but maybe towards the end we could see what problems ensue. I hope you keep writing! I would love to see what happens next for Raditz and Sage! :)
I really enjoyed your fic...very original. I love reading how Raditz interacts with Sage during this stressful encounter with Zarbon. Hopefully Zarbon's childhood friend can give them a hand. I think it would be interesting to see what would happen if Vegeta got thrown into the mix. I know he's "talking" with Freeza, but maybe towards the end we could see what problems ensue. I hope you keep writing! I would love to see what happens next for Raditz and Sage! :)