rate_review Reviews

Brilliant story!! I loved all of the Vegeta angst it was great! XD

That final chapter was intense and the lemon hot! I loved the explanation of why Goku wanted him :)

I read it from start again. I have to say I really love the dialog between the two, show the deep bonds in simple words. Well done for a lovely story.

Well, that was a very satisfying ending. I was surprised and pleased by Goku's flashback and his fantasy of 'rescue' from Vegeta with how well he knows the prince for how Vegeta would act or what he would say. I really liked how you dipped into their pasts and how each of them thought and felt about the other even when it wasn't linked to sex but more companionship and it leading to this. Vegeta's desperation and feeling of failure was powerful and the pride as only a shield and not the cause of his anger at Goku gave another layer to his character. The canon line "You don't know what humiliation is" really resonated. Of course Vegeta wouldn't just agree or admit anything and would have to fight it, but I'm glad you found a way to make Goku fight back, even overpower him, rather than meekly follow kind rules and not upset Vegeta.

Very hot at the end. I'm so glad it didn't fizzle into Vegeta just giving in or gentle lovemaking. It was a great twist but fit the storming emotions when Vegeta became forceful and that Goku enjoyed the pain of the bites and everything.
Great job.

This ends beautifully. Love vegeta switch table at last minite. To be honest, I also think to let vegeta take control is the best way to get over his harsh past. However, when he had the trust I also love to see goku porsuade vegeta religuish the control. Totally love the story. Thank you!

Cool that Goku found out Vegeta's feelings while fusing and now he admits it but it's driven his rage to tremendous levels. I hope Goku can break through!

Well that was a treat, sorry for the late reveiw.
Wondering just how you're going to wrap this up.
Goku's not exactly presenting himself as love struck and Vegeta's definatly got issues. Can't say I blame him. confessing you want to try having sex with someone after being up bad memmories, not sure if Goku is just curious and feeling guilty or he's really interested.
Did Vegeta get to sneak a peak inside Goku's head? Did he see anything to convince him that Goku really feels anything. If he was just like 'gee Vegeta has a crush on me, let's see where this goes', then 'yes' kick his ass Vegeta.
Thanks for the read, I eagerly await your next chapter.
ja ne
b-chan

I normally don't read story other than Kakarotts/vegeta paring, esp. there is rape of one of them involved. However, I tumbled in this story and I AM SO GLAD I DID! The last chapter is just beautifully written. I love the fact that vegeta had a soft spot for Goku. I also love the way you describe the turmoil inside vegeta. please let them have a happy ending, please!

a great new chapter, I can hardly wait for the next part. I hope they can figure it out between them, but we all know how stubborn our prince is. I love the way you describe his emotional state. Please, don't make all your fans wait for too long!

Cool fic, never thought someone would take this plot up but I'm glad you did. Can't wait for the end!