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Another chapter! Yays! I love that Vegeta doesn't just accept Goku's proposal so easily, make him work for it! :D
You write very good fighting scenes too, just the right proportions of fight vs. talk :D
Can't wait for the next chapter! XD

Excellant chapter. Loved reading Vegeta thoughts on Kakarot and it easing the pain and very glad Vegeta got to kill him. I loved the awkwardness at the end.

Looking forward to more chapters :)

I don't often read stories with content, but something kept peaking my interest about this one. I've seen it a few times when I've been searching through this section and today was the day I finally said "What the heck", I was nicely surprised that Goku was there to see the whole thing. It was painful, and horrible, and I think you did a very good job with it; as well as everything Vegeta was feeling, his emotions, his past, the way he tried to block it from his mind, and the anger and vengeance he takes in the end when the fear of the 180,000 power level is gone by the scouter proving it's only 23,000.

I really can't wait for the next chapters, if you still plan of finishing them. This was a great fic.

I mean I don't often read fics with THIS content. I should proofread my reviews before I submit ^.^;
Again, excellent fic. You're a great story-teller and I was completely sucked into this story. I also just checked when the last update was, so now I know more is definitely a'coming!

loved it! very good canon, please do more XD

Well, I'd like to start this off by saying that I hardly EVER review ANY story I may come across on either here or FFnet. I don't tend to read much anymore since the quality of writings has decreased. And I came across your stories purely by accident durring a misspelled search in google, which led me to one of your stories.

I'm a very big fan of Vegeta and anything that has to do with him, and I found you had a few stories directed around him. SO I decided to read them ALL. I was so pleased to finally be able to read something I rather enjoyed, just let me say. In fact, I enjoyed them so much I saved them in Word in fear you might one day remove them from here. I also have your Author page bookmarked for faster viewing.

Words can not express my thanks for the amazing writings you have posted here, and I can only hope that you continue with your Vegeta-centric fanfictions.
This particular one well...I can't say I was excited about the concept, but curious because I knew you could write well. And of course you made me enjoy it with your writing skills once again! I thought the characters were, for the most part, very in character. I liked that I could see it happening in my dirty little mind and it didn't feel OOC.

And now that you've put this pairing in my head, I'd like to ask you a question, because your E-Mail is hidden and/or I'm an idiot and can't message you because I don't know my way around this site. Would you mind terribly if I borrowed this concept you have of this pairing, and write my own fanfiction in a similar context? It's not going to be like your wonderful piece here, but it will bear a likeness to it in the sense that Ginyu is in Goku's body.

Of course I could never outshine you in your talent. I only wish to get this urge to write a similar scene out so I can stop dreaming about it. Hah.

"23,000! Hahahahah.... "Wait-what?"

B, can easily picture that scene. Poor Vegeta, didn't have any faith in himself till Goku 'showed' him. I can see a lot of self hatred forming due to that. Like the emotional twist of Vegeta shutting off and imagine it was really kakarot he was with; a small dark thrill, tho it didn't seem like you put any physical pleasure in there for him. I can only imagine how destroyed Vegeta would be if he's allowed himself to enjoy it and worst yet if Goku had seen him do it. But, then Goku's thoughts after might be interesting and mixed.

Wonder just how he 'felt' after getting his body back: 'Oh, wow! Owe! Wow! Owe!

The flash back was dark, I think Vegeta would do a lot to protect his self imagine. I think he would take pity poorly. I can almost see his hatred of Goku based off the fact that Goku knew about his past.
Hoping you'll give us an insight into Goku's thoughts, afterwards, in the future where ever you decide to pick back up. Time might give Goku time to digest and think (if you're the type that believes Goku can have deep thoughts ;p).

Looking forward to the conclusion. Thanks for the read so far.
b-chan

Wow, that was really great and I'm so happy you will add even more chapters! I'm so looking froward to it! And Vegeta deserved to kill Ginyu. Heck, he deserved to kill all of them! Keep up the great work!

Man, what a great chapter! I loved every moment of it and I'm really looking forward to what comes next. Great story, great way of telling it!

Why do I enjoy Vegeta's torture? I don't know.
But I do very much enjoy this.
Can't wait to see what will happen from here.