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September 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I have to say, i was damn causious before I click open this story. I love Kakarotto dearly. I read the summery knowing you killed him. So even though I am a kaka x vege story lover, I have been tiptoes around this story for ages. it's only because i run out of story i klicked open this tentertively. convincing myself if I see something I don't like I just brainwash myself with kaka x veggie's love. like when I see broli. I just skipped it pretend it didnot happen. ( to be honest, broli is too big for vegeta, his cough cough thing is too huge for vegeta. Also I always think he is more obssessed with kakarotto, because that is the only dialogue he have in the anime. Anyway, i was not prepared for THIS!! pointing fingers. I told myself I should not get too much emotionally involved, but I cried like baby in a sunny wendesday afternoon! Especially when I see the part kakarotto voiced vegeta's name on his death bed. O. M . G. Bwhawawawawa..... Also the scene when kaka met veggie yet could not recognise him. This remind me a verse by somebody: the longest distance between you and me is not the live and death, but it is when I standing in front of you, you don't know me loving you.
Damn you woman you killed my kakarotto! I hate you. sniff sniff. I should have stayed away from the story like my first instinct. Not liking now I sit her rabbinmy aching head from excessive crying. I hate you so much, for separating then. I hate you, hate you!! Crying over kaka's tomb bed.
Okay this is not a flame. you are damn good writer. I just did not take the news very well. or it is you who worked up my emotion too much. I hope you treat kakarotto better next. still crying.
Damn you woman you killed my kakarotto! I hate you. sniff sniff. I should have stayed away from the story like my first instinct. Not liking now I sit her rabbinmy aching head from excessive crying. I hate you so much, for separating then. I hate you, hate you!! Crying over kaka's tomb bed.
Okay this is not a flame. you are damn good writer. I just did not take the news very well. or it is you who worked up my emotion too much. I hope you treat kakarotto better next. still crying.
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July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was getting all teary eyed that Vegeta would never see him again but great surprise ending, off to start reading the sequel now :)
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July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hazaah! I was right about two things! :D How about that, hehe. Ugh, I can't believe you ended it like that. >< I was cursing as I read your notes all the way to the bottom...then I felt better when you said you were working on the sequel, hehe. But...is this one going to be an angst fic too? O.o You probably said so somewhere and I missed it. No, it's time for Vegeta's happy ending. :) Lol...but it's too bad that this Kakarot is someone that annoys him...like before. xD Anyway, I guess I should start reviewing your other story again...was in suspense on this one. >.> Now it seems like it shifted to the other one, hehe. Anyway...keep it up. :D Writers like you are rare to come by. ^^
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July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ahh awesome stuff, this sis really well written and i enjoyed the whole, fic, i was upset about kakarrot dying but i'm glad vegeta saw him :D
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June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So sad that Kakarot lived the rest of his life not quite knowing what was missing but I'm glad they had a final reunion before he passed on.
Is there still hope though now that Vegeta is seeing that movie, fingers-crossed :)
Awww it's nearly over, looking forward to the final chapter.
Is there still hope though now that Vegeta is seeing that movie, fingers-crossed :)
Awww it's nearly over, looking forward to the final chapter.
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June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So, you don't like gruesome things happening to Vegeta, and yet in your stories he gets raped, tortured and abused when in the story i just published, he just gets taken captive...you're silly. :) Okay and...Raditz can die, but not Vegeta? O.o Unless, Vegeta is just untouchable by death thanks to Piccoro and Raditz isn't as special. :/ Aw and of course it doesn't go the way i thought it would...and only one more chapter. :( Makes me sad that a good story like this is coming to an end, but everything must come to an end. Oooo, let me guess this last chapter. Umm, will Vegeta find like a reincarnation of Kakarot or Broly? O.o I sense this could happen, but, of course, I could be wrong. So, since I usually am, I'm eager to find out what else is going to happen...and perhaps, will there be a sequel? O.o
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June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ahh this is awesome :D:DF
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June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*gulps, trying to get rid of the dryness in her mouth* Wow. That was nothing like my daydream. :D (Though it never really is hehe) I wonder if Vegeta expected that? :p I know I didn't. Aw, your chapters are getting shorter. :( Not to mention they're ending in the worst of places. >< Oh well, as long as you update, I wont complain. :)
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June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was sooo hot! I feel guilty for enjoying it as I want Vegeta to get back with Kakarot. Vegeta turned into a little minx :) Wonder how he is going to feel afterwards.
That was curious about the red marks not going to show soon due to the water bath, has Picollo made him immortal? Can't wait to find out :)
That was curious about the red marks not going to show soon due to the water bath, has Picollo made him immortal? Can't wait to find out :)
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June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was shocked when you killed Kakarot and Gogeta and almost cried at Vegeta's reaction, very moving. What a cruel twist Picollo had up his sleeve! Poor, poor Vegeta, the only one to remember and now stuck as a sex slave :(
Hope you have a happy ending planned after all this misery
Hope you have a happy ending planned after all this misery