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O.O I know you know this, but that is like the worse thing you can do...along with skipping over a lemon. So, I've come to the conclusion that you're evil. Xp And...I kinda had an idea in what I was reading..and right now, I still think there's going to be a happy ending. :) But, since I said that, you're gonna change it, aren't you? But I can see the ending! :o Goku may or may not get his memory back and Vegeta might do something about it or give up. You were kinda vague in that part, so I'm not very confident in the happy ending now. >.> *sighs* But...it can't end like it is, I know you're gonna do something unpredictable...ugh, I shouldn't predict an author's story when I'm not that familiar with the work. v.v Anyway, excuse me while I daydream about how the end of this chapter 'should' have ended. :p

ahh very amazingly well written indeed :D

ahh it's very amazing and it's very beautifully well written :D

ahh very amazingly well written :D

Noooooooos! That was awful! I can't believe you killed him! >< Okay, all utter rage and hurt aside, I wonder how this will effect Vegeta now? :o Will he go back the way he used to? Or will he be like when his mother was killed? O.o Ugh...that was horrible...you're horrible. >.> You killed him. Xp I'm with Broly...it better be a happy ending. :( I'm all for how sad the story goes, as long as there's a happy ending...or I'll cry. No joke, it's happened before...I know I'm sensitive. :p Anywho, Kakarot better come back to life and I'm still waiting for Piccolo to make Vegeta young again. >:/ And it's going to take me awhile to forgive you for what you did. >.> ...and depending on what you do next...

So Vegeta now knows what Picollo is up to, glad he didn't succumb to his darkness (so far), but what a horrible thing to happen to Raditz! I hope Picollo was lying and there is a little piece of his soul left somewhere :(

Whoa, didn't expect Kakarot to actually be able to pull Vegeta away. Picollo will want revenge though so will Kakarot be strong enough?

Don't call your story tedious it's anything but :)

ahh very beautiƒully well written :D

ahh just awesomeness, hun, very well written :D

Oooo Kakarot is soooo mad, hope it doesn't affect his fighting!

Has Vegeta made Raditz question himself, didn't seem like it but I hope Vegeta keeps at him.

Loving Picollo as the master and you are right his magic powers suit the illusion. I love reading an evil Picollo :)

Poor Brolli though, unable to protect Vegeta anymore. Maybe he can speak to Kakarot.

Dun, dun, dun! Piccoro! Nice. x) Truthfully, I thought you were going to come up with something new for the god, but putting in Piccoro really blew my mind, lol. Soooo, getting reaaaaallly gooooood. :3 Long chapters and everything...except they're not long enough! >< *cries* Must...have...moooooorrrre. ><