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Liked all the family stuff with Gogeta and was sad Tuma died , but ooo now the plot heats up! He has Vegeta! Kakarot will go spare with worry :( How treacherous of Raditz, I usually like him but I'm not in this one as he sounds like a religious fanatic.

Looking forward to Vegeta meeting the 'god' and Kakarot hopefully coming for him :)

*notices note at beginning of chapter* that would be swell! :D Hehe I guess the key to writing a good lemon is detail and I get embarrassed every time I write lemons >< especially if they're as juicy as that. ;D The way you had Vegeta react to his son was sweet. ^^ I never thought he could be one of those overprotective parents. I always figured that would be something Kakarot would do, hehe. x) Anyway, true or not, it was different to read. :) *points to the last sentence of the chapter* what does that mean? O.o Okay, screw the part about saying that I'll cry over Kakarot. I'll die of heartbreak if Vegeta dies! >< Even in the series during the Buu saga, when Vegeta was fighting him and he was already dead...and I thought he died again because he quit his Super Saiyan form and...and...and he wasn't moving *tries not to get all teary eyed again* >< but I was relieved to see him up and ready for more. ^^ I just hope he's the same way in this story. :o But of course, he is the main character! :D But then again, I don't know how you end your stories yet. v.v Though, I guess it could mean something different? O.o After all, Roshi said 'we,' so I assume it has something to do with them all and not just Vegeta. Well, that's a little more comforting. ^^ *eagerly awaits for what happens next* :3

Yay! A longer chapter! :D Hehe, I don't know why, but when it comes to reading lemons, I have no issues hehe...well, sometimes. >.> hehe ^^' Sooo...at first, I was wondering if Raditz was the ‘mysterious stranger’ when he showed himself to Vegeta and when you described how he looked younger than Vegeta, I thought I was sure...but, then he started talking about a God and then I finally pieced it together. XD I knew you weren’t done with Raditz yet. Even though his time was short at first and I was actually disappointed when it was, I had a feeling that we were going to see more of him. ;) Hm. I think I know why Kakarot has that power now. So he can defeat the God, no? O.o I don’t believe Raditz when he says that the God is there to take away everyone’s suffering and unify everyone. Why would he do that when he’s caused so much misery in Vegeta’s life? :/ Perhaps to make him a more suitable mate for him? Hopefully we'll find out. ;) Although, I can see why the God chose Raditz in the first place...oh, wait...no, no I can't. XD Lol, I just...read some more, hehe. ><

Oh my gosh...that was deliciousness!! X) I literally had to wipe the drool off my chin from the sheer yumminess that you caused, lol. I always wanted to make lemons like that, but I guess practice makes perfect. :) I was just as shocked as Vegeta when Kakarot wanted to be dominated...it touched something in my empty heart. ;) I read it all at least twice. X) I didn't want it to end, despite the fact that it was also driving me crazy of how slow and sensual Vegeta was being, lol. It was long, but at the same time not long enough, hehe. Anyways, I'm glad you updated! :D I was starting to worry hehe. This story is one of meh favs. ^^ I'm gonna have to add it on my recommended list. :) If I haven't already. :/ Anyways, I'm still in suspense on when the mysterious stranger is going to claim Vegeta. O.o Or ruin his life again. :( I'm gonna cry if Kakarot dies! >< But he shouldn't...hopefully. :p After all, Kakarot's got that power and Brolly's spirit is still helping out. Psyched for more! :D

ahh very beautiful :D, i really love the passionate scene though

Thanks for updating so soon, and I'm really glad you are continueing the story :)

I was very sad when Vegeta ran away and the moments with Brolli, so glad Brolli convinced Vegeta. Was afraid Vegeta was going to be raped again but Kakarot found him in time. Phew!

I thought you brought them together well. Nice to see Vegeta and Kakarot are now together and can't wait for the ceremony and bonding :)

ahh you did am=n amazing job on this one :D

Spent the last few nights reading through your story and thoroughly enjoying it :)

Was very harrowing in the early chapters and I really felt for Vegeta, especially after he lost Brolli :( I'm interested in how you will bring Kakarot and Vegeta together as Vegeta doesn't even like Kakarot let alone have sexual feelings for him so far, Kakarot as usual wants to be friends and do the right thing for the spirit he spoke to but again nothing sexual yet.

I was sad when I got to the last chapter as I was so into the story, so hope you update soon :)