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for When Hell Breaks Lose...

by PrinceJiita

person Zofo
schedule April 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved the frisky Picollo and the arrival of Brolli, and having all the Saiyans reappear is wonderful. Especially like how happy it has made Goku and Vegeta. Looking forward to Goku/Vegeta action :)
schedule April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw, a cliffie. :o Very interesting so far. :) And it keeps getting more so as more comrades appear as much as the enemies. Oooo and a taste of lemon from Piccoro and Gohan! X) Hope there's more to come from them and others. ^^
schedule April 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
aww, why do you end it there? No fair. *pouts like a child*
schedule March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn...Bardock in ssj form. I'm intrigued ^__^ But will they all go away once things are fixed, i wonder? Lol @ "They killed all the refridgerators!" I forget Goten can be so cute. Ooh, what about King Vegeta?? Eagerly waiting for chapter 5!!!
schedule March 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay Bardock and Turles! *flails* More!
person Zofo
schedule March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Shaping up to be a really good story. I hope the pairings include Vegeta/Goku :)
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to more! I like how Yamcha hasnt forgotten the saibamen lol! Hmmm, Trunks and 17. Vegeta and Goku. I hope kinky things happen :)
schedule March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
:)
can't wait to read more. Sorry for leaving a crummy review but there are tacos on the table. ;)
schedule March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Am I a bad person for kindof laughing when Yamcha was like "No." ? Because I did. Anyway, look forward to see where this is going. And I'm curious to see who the pairing is. :)

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