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Finished Chapter 3, love the action. Yamcha is so cold-blooded, it's more than a bit scary. I love how direct he is with Vegeta, and Nappa's reaction. Looking forward to the rest!

Second chapter: Yay, he got away! And the other timeline's Goku shouldn't be a threat, but its Vegeta definitely might. Great fight-scene writing. Looking forward to the rest as time allows!

Well, I read the first chapter, and I'm glad it's Vegeta and not Goku that Yamcha is pining for! I can always go for some VxY, or YxV as the case may be. Kingdom Come by deaniebean and summerstarr really sold me on this pair. Goku as a complication scares me, because I am a firm believer that Goku can do anything he wants, so if he wants to stop this, he will! But I trust you... I have to trust you!

^__^ yay happy ending! I was hoping Goku would sense something was off. I guess there'll be a whole string of universes all dedicated to getting a piece of Vegeta-ass lol. This was such a fun read, I wish there was more. I am happy with the ending tho. It's happy and hopeful ^_^ Great story!

so i wrote a review and it got deleted cause aff.nets review system sucks... anyways. this was a great ending! i wish it would have been more detailed! like 5 more chapters or something with tons of preggos and unresolved sexual tension! either way it was a great story, even without the nut busting!

omg i almost forgot! I wanted to praise you! cause you made it awesome how happy vegeta ends up no matter what! happy with bulma! happy with goku! happy with yamcha! happy with goku again! almost like karma was like: here you go vegeta. 3 lifetimes of happy for your bad childhood.

I don't really like the pairing of Yamcha and Vegeta, being a Goku/Vegeta fan, but this was a very good story and it kept me interested, and I'm glad Goku got a chance at getting Vegeta too.

Hope you do a sequel of Goku going to Vegetasai, wooing Vegeta and killing Freeza :)

It was alright, but I feel like it was too easy to get Vegeta, it was too much of a happy ending maybe?

The sex is all hot. But why do I have the dread feeling that he is Taoing goku rightful place. Very well written.

great fight scene. love how vegeta is so flexible but powerful--u make him almost flirty in his technique, which fits. no wonder everyone wants a piece. even when yamucha finally "defeats" him, vegeta is really still strategizing how to keep the struggle on, submitting to let yamucha have his way so he can get to hopefully reach super saiyajin status--tricksy thing lol. and yet yamucha turns it around in that unbelievable lemon o_o;; I was actually glad things were going the way yamucha planned tho I am kinda hoping goku tries to get in on this...gotta love the conflict. I'm sure yamucha will prove quite the challenge if goku tries to move in on the territory. poor vegeta caught in the middle of this, tho since he's so far from a helpless maiden waiting for the victor...i hope he plays a more active role in who ends up with who. but hey, a saiyajin threesome isn't too shabby either. sorry it took so long for this review. I twitch in anticipation...some more. lol.