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ok this is like scary good, im entranced

i hate this sites review system! but im doing it just for you! Poor goku! Yamcha is like delusional and its hot and creepy at the same time. Poor vegeta, caught in the middle of all this with no say in the matter. Oh how I love to see him tortured! ! !

And then yamcha just pops in and is all like. HI VEGETA IM HERE TO RAPE YOU!


so full of win!

poor napa, I felt bad about his death. He was only trying to protect his prince's virtue!
i so badly want this fic to continue so im like pulling for yamcha to get his way but i just cant cheer for creepy/home wrecker/stalker/killed trunks and bra too!/desperate/still looserish/ yamcha! i hope vegeta kicks him in the balls at some point in this story @.@

fking hot~~~~~~

i need to go through your old stuff... this is crazy good.

aside from the amazing rapeing/smexying/mauling the part with goku is verrry interesting.

I wonder if the same thing that happened to yamcha will happen to him. in which he will become obsessed with poor lil old vegeta. everyone in the universe wants a piece of that ass!!!!!!!!

Wow. Goosebumps. You've done a nice job breathing life into the characters so that they grow from their source in a believable way. I love how you had Vegeta (love him!) turn the tables and claim Yamacha - interested to see whether his being the "claim holder" will influence the dynamic between the two and what other surprises he has in store for him. Yamacha seems to smugly assume that his superior power makes this timeline his little sandbox to play in, but his assumptions have turned out to be wrong more than once already... I'm wonder how badly he's messed up this timeline and who is going to fix it. (And what will Piccolo be up to when Yamacha is off-planet?) Can't wait to get to Frieza :) Keep up the good work!

quote ---> 'Mj11490: ‘Beautifully write’, yah, that one for all those ditzy dyslexic, diabetic, dirty blondes out there… plus their all too kind betas (thanks Anatra!) Glad you’re enjoying the read so far, hope the next chapter is as enjoyable.,
whoopsie my bad, i tend to be very clumsy when it comes to typing & i sure do enjoy reading your fanfictions very much, especiallythis, iwould never usually read a seme yamcha/ uke vegeta fic, but this one is amazing & it makes so much sense that yamcha wished himself as a saiyajin & nappa, oh nappa is just an annoying knob, hehe a super saiyajin yamcha definitely does impress vegeta alot

This is getting even more intriguing! I love Yamucha (sp?)'s aggression and determination--and preparation in the sturdy bed lol. Almost want to read ahead but knowing me, i'll read it all in one sitting and neglect sleep -_-;; I am on deviantart under littlekilljoy, btw, but not much there. I cant find an original file but one of my pics is on pixelgoddess's deviantart, too. Called "Vegeta Seduces Goku". Aiming to redo that one ^^

Sorry it took me so long to read these next two chapters. Uni had been keeping me busy the past few weeks : /

But, what a wonderful set of chapters to read this morning! I was wondering if you were going to have Yamcha turn himself into a Saiyan so that he wouldn’t have to worry about growing old again. I also like that you had him train in the time chamber to become strong enough for when he meets Vegeta. I can tell you’ve put quite a bit of thought and time into the plot with this story and it’s paid off.

I also enjoyed that you’ve maid Yamcha’s Saiyan instincts kick in because even though he still has his life experience as a human, things would be different for him now that he’s Saiyan.

And he’s on a roll getting rid of all the possible threats. I wonder how that will change the timeline as far as the strength Goku achieved from fighting those threats. I like that he plans to leave Frieza for Vegeta to kill. The last chapter was very intense! I can’t wait to read how everything turns out.

Thanks again for writing and sharing this.

I am getting very excited with your fanfic to the point I am ready to deman the full story hahaha I have a great idea where you are heading and I wonder did Goku really did fell in love with Vegeta from the very beginning and in the future try to gain Vegeta for himself arg that could be quite revolving goku,yamcha,goku,yamcha lol on and on it goes. Or perhaps a 3 way mating hmmmmm that could have many possibilities of many genres but any who my dear I am loving the way you are writing this from Yamcha's point of view it speaks and flows good. I also like the fact you had Yamcha go back to 'that' Vegeta. The quick witted, conniving, badass prince we all fell in love with. But I wonder how it will work.