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The story was great and I enjoyed the idea. However, the grammar made it hard to read and I ended up reading the same sentences a couple of times, re-creating the sentence structure in my head. This can lower a reader's interest in a story, so please keep an eye on this. Thank you for listening to me and please don't be upset. This is merely constructive criticism. I look forward to your other stories. Have a blessed day!

Oh my God, I love this!! X) The way you have the Saiyans do it is just...delicious hehe. It's also a bit different...and simple. It's just...this is how it is, so deal with it hehe. Also, listening to Rhianna sing S&M while reading Vegeta's time under Frieza is just...a whole new experience. X) Except it's the opposite of what Vegeta's feeling hehe...okay so maybe it was better when reading his time with Raditz hehe. It was too freaking perfect. x3 Another thing...Gohan/Zucin and Vegeta is just tasty. X) Nobody writes enough Gohan and Vegeta...and it's even better when Gohan/Zucin is the dom. x3 I should write one of those, hehe. All your stories are fantastic! ^^ You're like...the new Vegetachik hehe. Except she only wrote one yaoi and the rest were general...but they were still awesome. Anywho...I hope there's more to come. ^^ Am looking forward to 'lovers-to-be' in the future...maybe? :/ Anyway...had to comment. :)