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March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
very different (and one of my favorite poems). I can see gohan losing his mind because of losing trunks and then quoting poe in his madness--i mean, c' mon, its poe. lol at the bust of piccolo.
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March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
it wasn't bad at all. The fact that you kept the original dialog is probably why it got a bad review. That made it kind of funky, but not bad at all. I liked it. And it's Edgar Allan Poe so...you can't go wrong there. *gets excited* Oh! You could do Tell Tale Heart or the Cask of Amontillado. :D